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Updated on April 8, 2011


Once upon a star

in the beauty of the night

I followed a path so far

with the guidence of the light.

I just kept walking

not knowing what I'd find

to myself i was talking

just to pass the time.

The air was so fresh

the time went so fast

a breeze ran through my dress

but it didn't seem to last.

I realized just how far i'd gone

but I couldn't turn around

so i just kept moving on

then suddenly i found

I was miles away from everyone

but, I didn't seem to care

though Im sure it would be more fun

if someone else was there.

VLH 1984


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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank you nighthag--happy to share the moment-glad you enjoyed

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    K.A.E Grove 7 years ago from Australia

    i liked this it had a lovely flow and made me stop and think for a moment, beautiful

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    IN2Deep 7 years ago

    Thank you Rosie--they are my deepest thoughts-my life-gad you enjoy them--HAPPY DAYS for you..

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    Rosie Rose 7 years ago from Toronto, Canada

    Hiya in2deep, I enjoyed reading your poems. Thanks for sharing

    Have a nice day,