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If Love Was A Person- a poem

Updated on December 26, 2012
It takes two willing persons to make Love work.
It takes two willing persons to make Love work. | Source

If Love was a physical person

What Body parts would you see?

The first would be the Eyes,

The beginning to a union to be.

The next of Love's

Body part to see is

The mouth-

To form the Words

That create

The lovers' destiny.

The next part to see would be

The hands- Its touch

Determines how close

Their Love could be,

The most important part

Of Love's persona

Cannot be seen

But felt from within.

It Is the heart,

Without a passion

for another's life,

The Soul within

Has no


Then Love has

Fear to die.

All parts of

Love's Body

Must work together

And cling to another,

If the Relationship

Wants to live.

Copyright @ 2012 CMCastro


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      greencha 5 years ago


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      Christina M. Castro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      I will be right there with you shouting and dancing because we can identify love when we see it.

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING...!!!! sorry I had to shout it!

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      Robin Grosswirth 5 years ago from New York

      A beautiful and creative way to approach the anatomy of love.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Beautiful poem of all of love's components and parts no doubt!

      Voted up +++ and sharing Happy New Year

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Tender and clever write!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Christina how beautifully done.. I love these lines

      Without a passion

      for another's life,

      The Soul within

      Has no


      Then Love has

      Fear to die.

      wow how true this is.. many blessings to you

      Happy New year my friend

      voted up and sharing


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      Aga 5 years ago

      Beautiful, tender, warm... Great work!

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      FullOfLoveSites 5 years ago from United States

      It's quite cool and beautiful and tenderly written. Voted up and beautiful.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Very unique concept and I loved the flow of it. Votes interesting and sharing too. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing this one.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Clever idea and you managed it well. Thank you and congratulations.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That was very creative and beautiful! Nicely done!