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Images Retreat

Updated on March 4, 2016
we see what we want to see
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we see what we want to see,

carving out dreams

making meaning in threads

looped around days

as we tie ourselves together.


our tales find relief in reflection

our hearts, in retreat.



copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2016


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      Bill Holland 16 months ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm slow to get to this one and there are no comments??? Do people know what they are missing when they don't read your poetry? Talk about self-deprivation!!!!! We need to find you a publicist, Audrey. Your poetry should be read by everyone.

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      you are kind Bill! Thank you! I actually just posted it

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      mckbirdbks 16 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I liked the images this created. You can say so much with so few words. Bill is right, a good, strong publicist is needed. Have you taken the leap and published?

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you Mike! Actually, I finally did publish my first piece in a literary journal recently--and am sending pieces out now for submissions to others--It is a whole other ball game out there

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      Frank Atanacio 16 months ago from Shelton

      oh yes Audrey very well written :)

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      John Hansen 16 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Nicely penned Audrey.

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      FlourishAnyway 16 months ago from USA

      We. See what we want to see. Oh, isn't that the truth on so many levels? Great poem.

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      Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

      Wonderful poem with a lot of truth woven in.

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      Nithya Venkat 16 months ago from Dubai

      Great write, beautifully penned.

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      Mary Wickison 16 months ago from Brazil

      This is beautiful and so true. I think especially for older people as we do spend possibly too much time thinking about the past.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      I find myself retreating to a more gentle time, then I look around and see the need to get involved. Retreating heart..Beautiful!

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      Alison Monroe 16 months ago

      A very good poem

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you Frank! I always appreciate your comments!

      Thank you John--your comments mean a great deal to me!

      Isn't just that way Flourish! Hugs to you!

      Thank you FaithReaper! Hope you are doing well!

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 16 months ago from The Caribbean

      Always so much thought in a few rich words. Powerful!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Thank you so much alison! I appreciate your kind words! Thank you Vellur!

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      Linda Crampton 16 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

      You have the wonderful ability to create meaningful imagery in a few words, Audrey. This is another beautiful example.

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you BlondLogic

      Thank you MsDora

      I appreciate your kind words and your visit--Happy Sunday to you!

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      Shyron E Shenko 15 months ago from Texas

      Audrey,

      The imagery you create is special

      To each of your friends

      And with life's ups and downs

      Your poem blends

      In as few words as possible

      You have expressed a beginning and an end

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      Blessings and Hugs

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 15 months ago from Victoria, Australia

      The stories that we weave! A delightful little poem.

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you AliciaC!

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      Missy Smith 15 months ago from Florida

      Yes, I do believe we see what we want to see, and our dreams are born from that. Something I'm going through at this moment in time makes me relate to your words well. Nicely written as always, Audrey. You possess a magic to say a lot with a few words. Brilliant.

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      Genna East 15 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Audrey, I always look forward to your wonderful and inimitable poetry.. And I agree with Billybuc...your unique talent needs to be read by everyone. :-)

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      Martie Coetser 15 months ago from South Africa

      Absolutely true! Well said, Audrey!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you Ruby! Hope you are doing well!

      Shyron--your words are lovely!

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      Catherine Tally 15 months ago from Los Angeles

      Beautifully expressed, Audrey! Reflection and retreat are safe havens in this crazy-paced world. They keep us centered. Glad to hear you are submitting your fine work out there. All of the best!

      Cat:)

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      Deb Hirt 15 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      I believe that reflection and retreat define so many things. Nice work, and a beautiful reminder.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely poetry. Enjoyed.

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      Linda Rogers 15 months ago from Minnesota

      I like the photo you used to go with the poem. I like to read the words as I look at the photo and see what meanings come to me. Beautiful as always Audrey.

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      Sheila Brown 13 months ago from Southern Oklahoma

      A beautifully written message, as always, Audrey! :)

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Thank you Genna!

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Hi Cat! Hope you are doing well!

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Thank you Sheila!

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Thank you aviannovice!

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Thank you Minnetonka!

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Thank you Rasma!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Blossom!!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Missy!

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      Audrey Howitt 9 months ago from California

      Thank you Martie!

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