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Mind's Eye

Updated on January 17, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.


In my mind's eye

I see the sun, the moon, and the stars

New beginnings merging from afar

Circling around enveloping life

Paradise to be known combined

Everything is changing

Time spins faster

A streaming ball of fire

A million years away

Colliding among centuries

At our own dismay

Some lives broken

Some reawakened

Being born again in a new way

In life's cycle

Some will fall

Some reemerge again

Everything will come full circle

In this new beginning


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Stessily thank you very much for your constant support. Isn't it funny how everything in life comes in cycles?

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      stessily 6 years ago

      Caroline, There is such a sense of presence in this poem, which is on one of my favorite subjects: cycles of time. "Colliding among centuries" expresses perfectly the cylical and spiralling journey of all life across the universe. This is one of my all-time favorites of your poems for the mystical atmosphere which is established effectively, palpably, powerfully.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Daniel, Gypsy, Sky, Deborah, Mckbirdbks, Cheryl, & Always thank you very much for all of your support. I am glad that you liked my poem.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I like this Caroline. The idea of reemerging again after death is a belief of many. I like the thought of a new begining..I believe in Karma..Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry...

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      Cheryl Simonds 6 years ago from Connecticut

      I like the poem and the picture, great job, voted up. :)

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      mckbirdbks 6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      carolinemd21 it is a fact that we go through cycles. Same feelings, same dealings, and then seem to begin again. Excellent work. 'Colliding among centuries' is a really good line.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Just wonderful

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Sometimes you simply come fro far away.

      Great poem.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just lovely!

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      DanielNeff 6 years ago from Asheville, NC

      Very deep and thought-provoking poem.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thanks Marla I'm glad you liked it.

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      Marla J Neogra 6 years ago from Parkersburg, West Virginia

      I am not really into poetry, but, I LOVE the picture you used as your header pic!