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In Too Deep- A Poem

Updated on August 5, 2013

Crushing My Heart

On The Verge

Baby, I love you,

But you're consuming my mind,

To all else I am blind,

I feel suffocated,

I'm starting to regret that we ever dated,

I feel I'm in too deep,

All I want to do is weep,

Freedom is what I crave,

Wish I could be brave,

But instead feel like a slave,

To your overbearing heart,

I feel like I'm going to fall apart,

Baby, I love you,

But I can't sleep,

Because I'm in too deep,

My Inspiration

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Your poem reflects your deep, longing emotion.

      Thank you and will share with others.

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      James Kenny 3 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you very much vocalcoach, I'm glad you saw the connection.

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      John Sarkis 3 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

      Nice poem. voted up.

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      James Kenny 3 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you John!

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      mottiandbander 3 years ago from Chd

      Nice Poem.....

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      James Kenny 3 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you very much!

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful and voting up plus sharing. Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      James Kenny 3 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you very much Eddy.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      have I ever been there. I am so much happier now with my understanding lake...

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      James Kenny 3 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you very much Deb.

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      swathisunny 2 years ago

      Very emotional... Nice poem

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      James Kenny 2 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Thank you very much :)

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