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Interlocking Pieces

Updated on April 7, 2014
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

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we are just so many interlocking pieces

our edges planed to touch and nestle

our shared vision

a glistening upon an even surface


but every once in a while

a nub

which should fit

just doesn't.

perhaps overeager fingers

pushing and pulling in search of sky.


edges roughened

communion sought

and found

by wholes or halves

until its nub

is rubbed clean.





copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2014


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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you ubanichijioke!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Blossom!! Thank you!!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Perspycacious! Thank you for reading! Yes--teaching a bunch and also trying to get some pieces published--but I still love the sense of community here!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you DDE!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Lisawilliamsj!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Jo!!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one Bk42author!

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      Demas W Jasper 3 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Here you are! I looked at recent activity and all I found for the past eight weeks were comments. This is too good a poem to think that you might have slowed your output? Too much vocal coaching for dollars? Nice that you are still active here.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Frank!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you LadyFiddler!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Rasma!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Vicky!!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Alicia!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Hi Genna--thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you ImKarn!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Thank you Flourish!

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Audrey nice poem :)

      Have a lovely day

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 3 years ago from Lagos

      You nailed it! interlocking pieces indeed we all are. No matter how different things maybe, always remember we share something in common. this is a wonderful poem that could easily apply to anything... good job!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. Enjoyed your interlocking pieces of an intriguing poetic puzzle.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      What a great metaphor for your poem, creative, evocative and altogether lovely, including the image.

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      How very true! There is a softness to the words yet so powerful in meaning as “until its nub rubbed clean.” Stunning work…simply stunning.

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      Linda Crampton 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is a beautiful analogy with lovely imagery, Audrey.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautiful photo with pleasant words.

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      Lisa Chronister 4 years ago from Florida

      This is simply beautiful, I loved it! I voted up. Thank you for sharing.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      again you amaze me with your words.. April has taken hold of you Audrey and you're handling it very well..:)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Audrey, your poetry says so much in so few words. Very profound and beautifully done.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      lol..i feel like my 'nub' is rubbed clean...

      great description, Audrey!

      xx

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Clark--your comment made me tear up!

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      Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      So true, so true! And so well said. Voted up, beautiful, awesome, interesting!

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      Brenda Thornlow 4 years ago from New York

      Beautiful poem. Voted up!

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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      Good analogy. Some of us have jagged edges and others have been so sanded down by the hardships of life so that we try to fit just about anywhere.

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      Clark Cook 4 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

      Audrey-it's your Form that elicits all this awe from your fans. It's your Form that jolts the reader into new awareness, that compels her/him to read your poems again and again. Any knuckle-dragging idiot can say, "like, y'know folk's are like different like the way they like try t'get together, y'know.....like?" Good poetry needs to be BREATHED, read aloud, honouring the line length and pauses. There lies the music, beautifully apparent here. Your poems occasionally need a little work at the front and back ends, as you've said yourself. But not here. This is a gem.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Hey Jamie! Thanks so much! Now if I could just figure out form!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Audrey, you have such talent. Your poems always have the most beautiful ending lines and stanzas. You close your ideas so gracefully. Jamie

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Hi Ruby! Thank you!!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Amazing metaphor for the differences among people, their struggles and finally finding peace within. Beautiful my poet friend...Love it.

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