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Intoxicated,I stumble

Updated on November 21, 2014
My friend; Nouhayla
My friend; Nouhayla

Beside a window

She stands

In a dress made of white silk fabric,

Eyes out

On a spot, maybe, fixing,

Lips curve almost in a smile,

Maybe to a bloody fool guy

Under balcony serenading nonstop

songs to steal her heart.

Hair, brown and gold like autumn leaves

Cascading over shoulders

Touched gently by sunlight

Drawing me in like iron filings to a magnet ,

Intoxicated,

Bewitched,

Under spell like bad omen ,I stumble

On my way to heaven.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Lisa,

      Thanks so much for your input.I appreciate it. Have a great day there!

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      Lisa Williams 2 years ago

      This was very pretty! I voted up, thanks for sharing!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      We are good now, thanks for your concern.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      I meant to say the last couple lines. "Last night..." Oo oops. By the way I hope you and your family are well.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      I love the last night. A beautiful close to a perfect poem. Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Frank Atanacio ,

      Thanks for your comment.Have a nice weekend there.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      wow this was very good