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Short story "" Recognizing the invisible touch of Love"

Updated on October 20, 2012

"That invisible touch"

While crossing paths, true spirits will often collide. The power in the impacts of that collision creates a bonded connection. This fusion which started in just that magical moment is something one would not usually encounter, except only dreams, he /she may be able to see.

It's an addictive feeling, that hits you, and suddenly there is a catch on your line, it was not necessarily thrown out by you, it was thrown there from the moment you were born, in even a great argument that it could have happened, long before. But love and wisdom tells us, that it will create unwanted confusion, let’s stay with love and give peace a chance.

But now the chance time have come where you would need all the strength and the energy that you can conjure up. You must quickly any help that you know you may need to be successful in reeling in, what feels nothing short, must one of those we call, the catch of as life time that most humans, have promised and are they are prepared to give their life for. “Love” I will love to join in but, there are many who truly do not know what love is. I can only play this song to let them know that someone else understands and sang: play the video

Meat loaf. Anything for love.

This is nothing short of a monster catch coming up on the other end of your line. So let me take this moment to let you know, since the human love has been tested and tried and came up an astounding yes, if you choose to say, that “Love” is blind, but lovers are even more blinder? I know that you can prove you point many times over.

Only love can carry every possible answer, don’t ask me now, you must search deep within yourself. Only love can show you how to care enough, about your love, because it holds your truth of how love works for you.

You must, before approaching any kind of Love, set your mind on starting to build strength, so that you will be able to use it, in your defense. Not a defense from love, but possibly from whom it is that may be carrying love to you. Sometimes they may be sick and even have the incorrect address.

The hypnotic powers of those fruits which become ripened real soon, when it’s true love that is on your way, will have the very same look, feel and taste that are why it’s up to you, to break the monotony and save the accidental love. The real or true, or whatever you may call it, it’s one love! It is never involved in accidents or makes any mistakes. It you stayed too long, or you did not see, give thanks you have now seen. Someone just died, are you in a great position.

Be sure you are colliding with your true spirit, take your time, and feel good of yourself, understand your life. Know what you need. For even in the collision of spirits, your true love would already have your name written all over it.

Though the power of love, usually create some watering eyes and mesmerizing cries, it carries a command to which no one should ever miss, many have tried to resist, but whether it’s for them or not, this surprise which has never been understood by most, because it keeps bringing on those truthful feelings, which needs to be shared, but here is what! You are trying to get to the moon, but without a space craft. You will only get there in your dreams!

They never knew what's coming next, it saturates their weakness which that same weakness which everyone seems to always be carrying around. Then the fake pounces at the first sign of that very moment of weakness for which it awaited.

Without permission no words need be spoken, you are weak and cannot even fight the weak powers of that which is not the real thing, again caught in a trial and error. After which, so caught up, not even a try, at any form of resistance, just the sudden surge of electricity that it brings and that dose of passion, which in most cases it’s so deeply felt, and sadly mistaken for true love.

So everyone's aware of that special something which happened to them some time ago, where they had thought! Not sure of what to say, after the felt this magical whisper, a cold and lifeless touch, they somehow felt compelled, to follow, and this they say is usually followed, by that fatal embrace.

Too late, and much time wasted, they life off from under the covers flowers all around, with smiles on their faces, that’s their description, of how they feel when spirits collide with them. It’s that sudden rush, they all seem to love so much. Sounds like the most beautiful music ever heard, being made whether it was out of something that was there, or even out of nothing at all, just in that moment. It becomes the sweetest songs ever to be heard, a fully conscious dream wide awake, enjoying the nightmare with screams that's cannot be heard. The immediately awakening, to that which is your reality. Truth!

Everything that was said became the evidence of seeds that they hope were being planted, for if love lives here, then love will make your seeds grow.

Comforting promises that was wished between and among each other, it was not made as is the norm, so that a fool would be born. They were wise at least they though they were, they thought true love was there, so everything they had, was shared, and both had insisted that they “Wished.” The same answer that was once no, had been changed, wasn’t the same anymore, truth came, and said it’s now yes! It lasted only for the moments it lasted; maybe again they failed the test!

Not a shout, no warning, no calls, the silent sound bought some kind of conviction. Another time to go around, trying to be sure, once more.

That shadowy movement as quickly as it came, it disappeared and there it goes again, with a rather bold disguise, everyone expecting the feelings to last, no one meant to hide, love should never be just another surprise, but rather a wise decision bringing awareness to all those, who once experienced those irresistible calls, when that feeling inside becomes awaken, when those true spirits collide. Knowing that it’s on you, that it could sometimes fall.

Then they would touch it’s no longer a secret, just too openly confide, the chase is over there nothing to hide. Becoming magnified and simplified in you. But it's again off you go on your amazing ride, we would all admire that which was meant to last forever, and a day, when true spirits collide. A feeling which we love so much while always longing for;

" Recognizing the invisible touch of Love"


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      That you Hyphen and you are quite welcome.After being so uplifted by those square watermelons , because I always wonder how the issues that are so important to peoples lives are not quickly and very often discussed , but I had an answer, and that is I would not go further , because I may think I going further and actually never moved.

      Our lives are the most important thing there is.

      I thank God.

      Thanking you again Hyphen , always put aside your own personal feelings and see what God thinks. Too many people think after the fact.

      Have a Blessed day!

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      Brenda Barnes 6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Hello sky. Love is the most powerful force ever created by God, who is Himself love. Love recognized is a closeness with the Father. This comes in form of a spouse, friend, family member or brother in Christ. Thanks for this devotional this morning.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I do hope you know that every time to stop by you leave very thoughtful and insightful comments . I can only hope when you leave, that you also take a piece of mine with you, it will be the greatest pleasure knowing you do.

      Sincere thanks dear poetvix always nice when you come around, and bless up with your presence.

      Blessings dear lady.

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      poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      There are so many kinds of love that exist around us all. For me, and this will sound silly, one of the truest, greatest loves is that exhibited by dogs for those they love. A dog is the most loyal and shining example of how to love unconditionally I know of in the physical world. I know it pales in comparison to a blinding love between man and wife, but still, I think we can learn much of love from them. The picture you included of the two dogs was great! God bless!

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I remembered when you laughed at when the fox could not get the grapes. Now when spirits collide , it is what it is! Always remember they do each and everyday in your presence . See how those police stands over a body and laugh, they have been there done that. Imagine a mother looking at that behavior over their son's dead body. When God sees what the forces of evil is doing to his beautiful world. You know he got to do something. Thanks


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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      While crossing paths, true spirits will often collide. a perfect start to this Hub amazing once again my friend.. :)

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Rose and I can proudly say is yes you can, be in contact. It come from purity in Love.

      Thanks as always Rose you see to have a keen inner eye ,that's helps you well in describing what's there .

      Life is simple , because it came from simplicity . Love remains simple , but the truth is what quickly running away from the Love making it Null and useless. That' what this piece is all about.

      Thanks as always Rose.

      Give God the Glory .....Bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Love is one of the strongest of human emotions. However I'll will say that love also keeps us in close contact with those who have gone beyond the stars. I've had contact with quite a few of my loved ones after death and I know it's due to the force of love. The most wonderful love is the everlasting and comforting love of the Lord. God bless.