Irrevocably Inseparable
From the soul that dwells
In thy heavenly self,
The smile which justifies
My unconscious existence
From thy beauty inexorable
I stand irrevocably inseparable
From thy scented locks
Bearing a healing potion
Innocent eyes, adored
Arrest all motion
From the chimes of your voice so immortal
I have become irrevocably inseparable
From thy each moment
Thy each sentiment
Each leap of thy heart
Each breath inhaled
The ecstasy your touch reverberates
From you I am irrevocably inseparable
From your truth and your lies
Your joys and your ire
Your love and your hatred
Promises kept and failed
From each entity in you identifiable
I truly am irrevocably inseparable
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AUTHORThanks Miss Cue...
Thanks for the visit
Rahul...HELLO!!! You never cease to amaze me.
Beautiful... :) Loved it... :)
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thanks so much Aubrey for the continued and valuable support :)
Very beautiful Rahul. Great job! :) Loved it.
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Thanks Lovedoc.... I am glad my work could evoke such feelings..... thanks for the kind support and feedback :)
So much love and passion in your words. The images speak for themselves. Voting up awesome! nice profile photo.
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Thanks Rds... I am glad you liked it
A beautiful passionate poem :) Thumbs up!!
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Thanks so much Sue... I am glad that you liked it my friend... I am humbled by your continued support :)
Hi Rahul
Beautiful and heartfelt!
Voted up and away
Take care :)
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Hey Shruti... :) Thank you for the kind words...I am glad you liked it :)
aWesome stuff! beautiful emotions!.... I like the repitition and the words are quite powerful... voted up :)
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thank you so much Girish... I am glad you liked my work
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Loads of luck to you and your wife my brother :).... Perhaps someday... I will visit you two for supper :)
Thanks for the kind words my friend :)
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Rasma... you are a gem of a person.... and I can never be as romantic as you are my friend.. :)
Thank you so much for your kindness :)
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Thanks so much Flash ... I am glad you liked it :)
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Oh yes Maria.... I know about love... I have felt the highest degree it has to offer :)
Thank you so much for the visit :)
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Thanks so much Eddy... I am glad you liked it :)
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hey Thanks Deergha... I am glad you liked my work...
Thanks so much for the continued hublove and support :)
Humbly appreciated
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thanks so much Vellur.. I am glad you liked it )
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hello Dana! Thank you so much for your kind remarks.. You yourself are a talent I am constantly in awe of :)
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Thanks Lesley! I am glad you connected and liked my work :) I am humbled by your kindness
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hello Jodi.. Nice to meet you.
It is wonderful that you freely pointed your opinion over my work. And believe me, it will be very useful to me :). Getting to know yourself better that too from a fellow poet is heavenly.
thanks for your extremely valuable opinion and a generous feedback over my work.
Greatly appreciated
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Thanks Beck... I am glad you liked this.... :)
your kindness and support humbles me :)
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Hello Jennifer... thanks for the kind words... :) I am glad you like it :)
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Ahh! thanks for the kind words dear Ashley.... m glad you like my work..... people like you keep me going... :)
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True that Martin.... Martin... sadly I couldn't :)
Thanks for the visit
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I am glad you chose to read my work before bed :)
Ahh... college time is taking its toll on me my friend.... I miss being 24*7 on the hub
thank you so much for your kind words :)
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Hi Faith.... whoa... 1000 emails.... must be a tough task to go through them I suppose ...:) I am glad you shortlisted my poem though hehe!
Thank you so much for the kind words... the support of wonderful people like you keeps me going :)
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Hello Maria... My lady.... oh yes! I have felt true love... I surely have....
I am humbled by your kind words.. thank you so much :)
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Hello Mother Deb! I am glad you liked it.... :)
Thank you so much
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Hey Shauna... I have missed you sista... Thanks for the kindness.... Someday... when I feel the time is right... I will try to publish them :)
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Hello Sommer...
Thank you for your kind feedback :)
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Hey Effer... thanks for such kind words... I am glad you found my work worth.. :)
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Ah Sir Vince... when words of appreciation fall from the source you call your mentor .... the feeling is just .... what can I say ... " EPIC" haha...
Thank you so much for your utter kindness
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Thank you so much Sir Bill....When I get such encouragement from wonderful people like you ... It motivates me to the highest of spirits trust me...
Thanks again :)
very well expressed admirable poem, i love the beautiful pics, voted beautiful.
Love is in the air here bro, I will definitely share this one Rahul, thanks for being so loving and for sharing such a positive powerful piece of poetry here. My heart is inseparable from that of my wife's too, your poem inspire such felling to emerge.
Lovely, radiant, and ravishing altogether in one Bravo! thumbs up and out!
Voted up and awesome. Rahul you are a master poet, dreamer and romantic. Loved this. Passing it on.
Romantic and passionate poem! Vote up!
Rahul,
You speak of love as if you know a little something about it...so lovely.
Voted UP and AB. Hugs!
Beautiful words.
Eddy.
Passionate and truly romantic one.....well job done as always, Rahul
Votes all up and I am going to share for sure.
God bless you.
deergha
WOW your poem as usual has me all in admiration of your work. Great poem, voted up and shared.
Beautiful words and images. You are an amazing poet. It is a pleasure to read your work. Voting up, etc. of course.
Every word - every image - absolute beauty!
i so adored this - i am sharing, liking, tweeting, voting - and loving!
Incredible work. A friendly bit of criticism from a fellow poet however, the switching between 'thy' and 'your', which are obviously from different time periods, threw me off a tiny bit. Also, the lines using 'thy' seemed a little forced. In any case, this is an incredible piece of literature and I commend you on your talent.
It takes special talent to weave such beauty throughout this amazing poetry. You are a wonderful writer.
Aboslutely beautiful.
Voting up and sharing
Rahul, this is lovely! Voted up and all sorts, and thanks for an enjoyable read! All the best, jen
What can I say? You have a gift for finding just the right words to invoke flights of fancy in all of us. Another astounding poem.
Beautiful and so true... provided one can survive. Wink.wink and thank you
I was ready to retire early tonight until I crossed upon this lovely poem of yours, Rahul. I'm glad I didn't hesitate to read it. Would love to share it on my Passionate Poetry page on FB. I actually miss your poetry and miss you around. I'm really happy to find this awesome work, as always that is in you. Thank you for sharing, Rahul!
Rahul!!! So glad you popped into my e-mail this day. I have been drowning in a sea of literally over 1,000 emails, so I may have missed your outstanding poetry. I'll have to catch up for sure. I love this "irrevocably inseparable! You are the finest of the finest of poets around. The imagery of the words already paint the picture so well, but you are a master at picking the perfect imagery to go along with your exquisite words. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper
Only a man who has known or felt true love could convey such emotion in his words. A heartfelt poem here Prince Rahul with the sincerity and purity that has become your signature.
Maria.
oh my rahul... son.. this is so awesome and beautiful.. how moving this is... and breathtaking... blessings and hugs
debbie
Oh, my brother, these are the words of the soul I so love! You really do need to publish your poems. No one writes with such depth as you!
Beautiful and awesome poem! Voted up and more
A Master Poet, Rahul.....your words stir my heart and awaken my senses..... This poem is exquisite.............UP+++
Oh to be such. You my friend are as billybuc said a craftsman of the highest order indeed, its my pleasure to read your work. We your readers are irrevocably inseparable from your talent. Bravo, love is so inseparable when you find your twin. Peace and blessings I send to you this day.
You are a word craftsman of the highest order, a true talent in the poetry genre. This is beautiful my friend, and a wonderful gift to share this Tuesday morning. Thank you!
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