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Is It Any Wonder?

Updated on November 29, 2013

Is It Any Wonder?

My Friend,

We began as girls

Sharing more together

than we even had to begin.

We traveled as women

passed wormholes of time

and sprinted through our lives.

We crossed and surpassed each other.

Doubled back and came around again

We loved the same.

Hated the most common enemies.

Laughed our way through ditches

And shoved each other up mountains

Same life

Same fate

I walked inside

and wanted your life.

You lent me pieces of it

for my own stained glass mosaic

Borrowed love

to crazy glue my life together

Do you now wonder why I love him?

Why I can't live without him?

Must live without him

Choose everyday not to take him

For you

For each of us

To be saved

"My Immortal"

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      Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      What a lovely picture you paint! I can see the girls walking through life together but what a melancholy end. Loved it. :)

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you sunny! And yes, I am glad the feeling at the end comes through!

      Thanks for reading and commenting!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      It's good to 'see' you back writing again Theater girl! Hope you are well. Your new piece has a seemingly very personal nature, composing a bitter-sweet symphony of the soul.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Rayne123 3 years ago

      Very nice poem, wow its amazing

      Paints such a heartwarming picture

      Laurie

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you! It's good to be back! And yes, very personal. Thank you for reading and your kindness!

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you rayne, nice meet you! Thanks for reading!

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Romeo, I just also realized that you used the title of a favorite song in your comment...so thank you again!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Beautifully written poetry. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Jamie! I feel very blessed that everyone takes the time to read and leave such lovely comments!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      "I walked inside

      and wanted your life.

      You lent me pieces of it

      for my own stained glass mosaic

      Borrowed love

      to crazy glue my life together"

      Great lines from an awesome poem. Much enjoyed and voted such.

      Thank You,

      Kim

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Kim,

      Thank you so much! Whenever I read your comments, you so often pick my favorite lines! I have been away for a while, life preventing me from really "finishing" anything that I deemed worth posting....so I mostly appreciate the encouragement and kind words! I am glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading as always!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Tg,

      SO glad you are back. I completely relate to the "finishing thing."

      Always as pleasure to read your work.

      Kim

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you again! The same goes for me!

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      Randi Benlulu 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      What a beautiful poem! Powerful words and powerful struggle! Thank you for sharing! up++

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you btrbell! I appreciate the visit and your wonderful comment. You are most kind!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      theater this is actually really good :)

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Frank! That means so much even after your other comments! We all experience times when we seem stalled in our "process". So, it is so encouraging that you think this well done! Blessings to you!

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice work, Jennifer. And very nice to see you again.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Wayne! I appreciate the visit and the comment and kind support. Glad you enjoyed it!

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      mylindaelliott 3 years ago from Louisiana

      Interesting description and explanation in your poetry. Thanks for sharing it.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you for visiting! I appreciate the comment as well!

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      Mike Robbers 3 years ago from London

      Very beautiful poem, i really like the way you wright!

      Voted up of course!

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Again, mike, I am happy to have you read and for your kind words!

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      Poetic Fool 3 years ago

      Touching, bittersweet ... awesome in general. I loved reading this. Thanks for sharing.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you poetic! I really enjoyed the piece that I read of yours today as well!

      I am thrilled that you enjoyed this and that the emotions came through! Be well!

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