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Jealousy,Black Energy

Updated on March 11, 2013

Jealousy

Black energy

Boils up

On a slow fire

Welling up in the portals of her eyes

As she watches him in a bar with an other prey he steers

And closing in

On the lips tasting the nectar of her inside

Like a venus fly trap snaps shut around an insect ,

Digesting

She hates the simile,the fact he becomes

She tightens her grip

Tramples on her heart

And then steps lightly forward to the stool

Like a dancer so lith

And as quick as lightening she stabs him in the heart,

Ending the happy ending!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @ janshares.Yeah,it has a happy ending lol thanks for the visit and comment.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 5 years ago from Washington, DC

      I was drawn in by the green eye of jealousy, enjoyed the poetic twist. WOW! Interesting happy ending :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @midget38.Thanks so much for stopping by and commented .I agree with you.I can destroy everything,even the jealous person!

      Many blessings to you!

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      Oh, yes, I so, so agree, James. Jealousy can stab at the heart and...destroy. Well said, indeed, and sharing!

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @ Vellur .Thanks for the visit and vote.

      Have wonderful day!

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Powerful and well expressed. Voted way up.

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks Elena for the insight. Isn't it kind of silly to think that tearing someone else down builds you up? Jealousy is a disease, love is a healthy condition. The immature mind often mistakes one for the other, or assumes that the greater the love, the greater the jealousy ,in fact, they are almost incompatible, one emotion hardly leaves room for the other

      Have nice day Elena

      Tijani

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Jealousy is such negative Karma, that makes people do the the weirdest, most stupid, dangerous things. Some regret it, some surprisingly don't.

      Anyway, I enjoyed reading your poem and I like the photo too.

      Regards, Elena

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @ LaThing.Thanks for the visit and the vote .Have wonderful day there.

      Many blessings to you

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @ Mhatter99.Thanks for the visit and the encouraging comment.

      Have a nice day!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wow..... You really described the scene! Such envy, such emotion ..... and the move! Wonderfully written...... Voting up and awesome!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for putting forth your well crafted perspective.

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      @wayne barrett.Very true, if you thwart a female in something she really

      wants to do, you'll pay and pay and pay.. lol .Thanks for the visit.

      Many blessings to you

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      Wayne Barrett 5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Oh, yes. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned! Very well done.

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