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Just Let Me

Updated on May 21, 2012

Just Let Me use my talent

to write.. some thing nice

something... soft and tender

not something... cold as Ice


Just Let Me show you..

the warmth... in my soul

awaken thoughts in your mind

that are there.... we both know


Just Let Me say words....

so tender to hear

that will make you want to hold them...

and always... keep them near


Just like a tiny kitten

so innocent and sweet

with green longing eyes..

that will glow from the heat


Just Let Me put down

what I want to say

My words might have to

take you.... all the way


From the Bright Stars... to

the Blue depths of the deep,

To the center of your Heart

where true Emotions do sleep.


Just Let Me .... wake them

and remove the fright

like the Moon rules the Oceans

to be together for life


Yes... Just Let Me

tell you... whats deep in my heart

how together.. a love between

you and I.... will start


Just Let Me show.. my tender love

and how it stays...forever in your heart

and will keep us together..

and never let us part.
























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    • Vidya Mallar profile image

      Vidya Mallar 5 years ago from India

      Very nice poem... It reveals the depth of love that you reveal for your beloved one.. Voted up.....

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Michael, I love this! So very sincere and loving. I think the warmth in your soul ALWAYS shows. Very muce. Love ya

      dotti

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      I love this poem you have a beautiful way with words.

      Voted up and sharing

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Sweet and tender, Michael.

      Your way with love words is well-known by now, and your expressions simple yet deeply touching.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ vidya, thank you for your kind words. may you always have love in your heart.

      @christen, thank you for reading my poem. very glad you like it.

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      Madeleine Salin 5 years ago from Finland

      This is so beautiful! I love the photo of the cat. Voted up!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dotti, my sweet.

      your comments are always anticipated to stir my inner feelings with inspiration. glad to see you are back home safe.! glad you like my poem.!

      loved your last poem.!!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Michael, you must be a tender soul. Your work consistently speaks to that side of the heart--beautifully done!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Katrine , thank you for your kind words, happy to bring a smile to your face.

      @made, thanks for your comments. I have another cool pic of a cat but am saving that for another poem.

      @ Audrey, thank you Audrey , your comments are always considered fine and cherished.

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      Murphy 5 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Heart felt meaning that we can all relate to... With awesome structure too... Thank you !

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      bluebird 5 years ago

      So heartfelt my friend, beautiful!

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Michael. can't say enough about this poem. so tender..I haven't returned home yet. not until sometime tomorrow. Actually considering a move to the area, but wouldn't be for months...still, exploring a bit. take care, and keep those wonderful love poems coming. I'm loving them, even if not 'living' them. lol later, my friend..love ya

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      I was drawn in by the form

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @critical, thanks for the comments

      @bluebird, my sweet, yoour melodies are always welcome in my hub

      @Dotti, i will pray for your safe return. why not Colorado? in fact Pueblo, you will love it here.

      so will I. LOL

      @ hatter, thanks for the kind words although they are few, they carry weight.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      A slightly different style but all the more warm and compassionate, Michael! One can never get used to your expressions on pure love...so real, they often take me by surprise! :) Thanks.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Voronwe, thank you for your kind words. my poems try to express what i feel. not always happy, but love isn't always happy.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Cleaner3, this is one of the best poems you have posted! I love the verses and they are so expressive on love. Also, I love that cat with the green eyes.. the reference to it as a kitten that warms with the heat -- very meaningful!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, thank you for your kind words. i am so happy that you like this poem. i try to touch all my readers with my words and it makes me feel good to see that I have done this.

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      Keneesha M Hodge 5 years ago from Chicago, Illinois

      Nice. I remember those feelings of great love :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      miss coffee, thank you for the visit, glad you like the poem.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, so very beautiful and the words just flow like a sparkling in sunlight waterfall of everlasting love and longing, amazing!

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      Fayrii 5 years ago from Utah

      Lovely work. :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ max, thanks for your kind words max. love is like the ocean so huge and deep at he same time.

      @Fayril, thank you . hope to see more of your poetry on the pages.

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      lifeoflata 5 years ago from Tacoma Wa

      Very passionate poem my friend, nice!!

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      This is so cute , light and refreshing. It's like telling me life is beautiful.

      I love this piece plus the pics makes it worthy for my time..Regards !

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      I love the pink Parrot.

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      You are successful in your work, your words can cross the bright stars and the blue depths of sea, good work, keep writing

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @life, thank you for commenting on my poem.

      @angel, glad to have you coment on my poetry. yes two pink parrots in love . it was so cool i had to put in to show love even in the birds.

      @girish, thank you for your visit. and leaving a comment.

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      Oh Cleaner, this is just beautiful, I love the flow and the deep emotions. You keep out doing yourself. I said of your last beautiful poem that it was your best ever, I think its been upstaged. Your poems speak simply and effortlessly of very real and deeply felt feelings....just let me.....tell you what an amazing poet you are!!! My votes and best wishes to you dear Michael and sharing.

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      Lot Rillera 5 years ago from Philippines

      this poem is very nice, with the lovely pictures. life is beautiful to cherished ! voted up! Lot

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      Cynthia B Turner 5 years ago from Georgia

      This is so very beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      Michael let me first off thank you sir for leaving complimentary comments about my work at my scribes and suggesting that you can learn from my me. Sir, you are doing very well without my help:-))

      You sir are mastering the gift you've been given. As I read more and more of your work here I've come to recognize the love in your heart and the passion you have for LOVE. You have so much of it to give as you yearn for it through what your write.

      You are quickly becoming a renown poet and reaching out with all the love in your heart to your fellow man. I trust any woman who reads your work will soon come to realize that you are speaking to them in your poetry.

      Keep up the great work, I admire your contribution to LOVE.....Peace and blessings to you sir.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Annie, thank you Annie. When a beautiful woman as you gives me kudo's it is something special indeed. i hope i can live up to your expectations. thank you annie, you are a special woman.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Lot, thank you for the votes and for leaving a comment.

      @cyndi10, thank you for such kind words.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      vincent, my friend. thank you for commenting. Yes i try to make my writings a personal sort of work hoping that i can make every woman feel as if i wrote that for her, for all women need love and when you can touch someones mind with love with out being physically there it is indeed something special for me also.

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      Maurice Wisdom Bishop 5 years ago from San Tan Valley

      Very passionate piece. I love the emotions you put in this piece. I vote up and much love and respect

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      wisdom, thanks for the visit and the comments.

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Hey handsome! just wanted to tell you, I've been watching all the activity going on around "Just Let Me". and I'm so thrilled for you!! Is that amazing

      flurry a regular thing? WOW! Super news for a super guy - Love ya'

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      my sweet Dotti, you have watching me!! you naughty girl. why don't you just mail me. it's easier.

      go see my other "the other half of a man". you might like it.

      waiting for that e mail!

      Love ya, dotti.

      Michael

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Michael I don't have your email. Is it on your profile or something? I will definitely look at 'The Other half of a man'...NOW, lol

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      glad you like the poetry. the ball is in your court Dotti.!!!! and the address on your hub.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Just let me tell you that I am lucky to have come across you as a fellow poet :)

      Brilliant!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      rahul, thanks for the coments. i see you like love poetry too.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      just let me greet you...what an awe inspiring poetry Michael...you amazed me on this one...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Raci, thank you for the comments my loyal raci.

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      Aisha Jilani 4 years ago from Lahore

      truly amazing poem... i love the way you write

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Aisha, glad to see you here on my hubs . I also like the way you write . thanks for the visit and the comments.

      Michael

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Deep passion and wonderful pictures to express such love.I enjoyed very much.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      thanks dream On , for the comments and the visit.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Oh so beautiful... The flow was like a song and the words wonderful.

      Loved this and the gorgeous girl in blue on the beach....... What a fabulous picture.

      Thank you for this.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dim, thank you for the kind words . so glad to see you visit my hub of poetry.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      From the Bright Stars... to

      the Blue depths of the deep,

      To the center of your Heart

      where true Emotions do sleep.

      Such beautiful words and I share this wonderful poem on twitter/Fb and google+.

      Eddy.

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      Robert Elias Ballard 4 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

      A beautiful poem. You have a tremendous gift.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Eddi, thank you my friend for always lifting me up with your kind comments and the sharing .

      @fiddleman. thank you for the comments and the read.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      How did I miss this? Really special, one of your best. I love it. ^

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie Lynnley, thank you for the read, you are a bit late, but always welcome. I am a big fan of your work too .

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      I just found this piece of lovely poetry. You will have girls and women swooning for this stuff. ; ) Good job, even if you did write it before I ever found you.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dreamseeker, thank you for the nice compliment . I am glad you have found me for now i have found you ande will be visiting your hubs . again thank you for the comment.

      Michael

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      'Just let me tell you' how much I love your poem. Wonderfully romantic!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you acaetnna, you are also a romantic poet .. I admire your work and talent !

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Awesome , Awesome my man ! .......:-}

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Michael,

      Wow, I missed this most exquisite write from over 15 months ago ... now how could she resist such words of love to just let you love her ... beautiful. The green eyes of the cat are intensely beautiful too! You missed one yesterday, but I know you are studying here of late.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. my lovely flower.. sooo we are searching each others writes and finding hidden gems ...? glad you like this ..Faith .. To make love to your mind is almost sweeter than the real thing .. for I use your imagination in conjunction with my own energy to ultimately make you and me have a lovely experience of togetherness .. so sweet and heavenly.

      Well must go find this ..what I have missed ,can not have that ..!!! LOL.

      Love ..

      Michael

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      bluebird 3 years ago

      Very, very nice. You do well. I always like reading your work.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you bluebird .. loved your last hub.. beautiful and very inspirational ..!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      You may benefit from the powerful testimony of Jeremy Camp at en fuego (on fire ... for God) and the love of his life who got Cancer ... and other testimonies contained therein. You are very expressive even in your commenting. LOL

      Have a lovely day, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I apologize, if I have stepped over the line Faith.. :(

      I meant no disrespect and am very sorry . Sometimes my expression overwhelms me ..! :)) Will try to contain it in my comments with you.!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      No apologies necessary : ) you are just one passionate one who loves deeply for all... even a tiny ant as in your other write : ) I do love as Christ's loves, that agape love, as a sister in Christ.

      Your image of that cat up there has reminded me of another lovely person, Cat ... has she left HP, for I know she would always be sure to comment on your poetry?

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. I thank you .. I actually saw a comment from her saying she was busy and STILL trying to catch up .. I think I did scare her..!! she does have a lot of fans and you know once you get behind it is hard to keep up .. as with you... constantly answering all who love you ..!LOL Faith I love you like my sister and if you were here I would give you a biggggg hug.!

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      LOL, yes, it is very difficult to stay on top of things around HP Town, for it moves so fast and trying to keep with all that goes on, although it does seem to me it has slowed at bit around here being a lot have jumped ship.

      My husband tried his best to get stationed out in Colorado when he was in the Air Force, as he put it on his "dream sheet" but of course one can fill that out, but they are going to send you where they need you. I know I would have loved living in Colorado for a couple of years as least. But, alas, we loved living in Tampa/Clearwater Beach, Florida area for four years! It was the best times of our lives.

      Yes, you may very well have scared the kitty off a bit : ) with your overpowering words of adoration which you so freely lavish on all : )

      I can feel your virtual hug all the way down here in southern USA,

      Hugs back to you too this day, and I hope you are having a smile on your face today, for there is always at least one thing in this life to bring a smile to one's face ... if we try really hard, well, maybe it is not even that hard...just taking one breath each day is a great blessing.

      (((Hugs)))

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      looks like me and you are going to have to make sure the lights are still on .. I think it is just the summer time and people are busy... many will find that those othersites are shallow and come back home .. I will keep posting here for I have many friends .. as you ..my dear .. Tree, (LOL)

      I will searching your hubs for another soon .. I am sure there are a few I have not seen..!

      Michael :)))

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      LOL, yes, I am going to publish one either this night a bit later or early morning. : ) I am glad you are, for it would not be the same without reading your poetry here.

      Yes, many are winding down the summer, especially with this weekend being a long holiday weekend, so better publish something before all leave town.

      Hugs, Faithful Tree : )

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      D.Juris Stetser 3 years ago from South Dakota

      Michael, you are still the prince of romance! Kudos, my friend...wonderful seeing you here...voted up beautiful and awesome I've been irritated with HP's

      puritanical (prissy) attitude to passion.. I have a blog, called cosy little cottage, and anything goes. lol hugs, Michael...

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dotti .. yep .. "The Prince of Romance" I like that ..! I have seen your blog.. very good .. but is not as racy as you think ..(I don't think so anyway ) LOL.. but you should answer more hubs..

      Dotti .. it would be more fun..!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hey, Michael,

      Jackie just joined me on my front porch, you should too for a cool glass of southern sweet tea! That's what we drink down here in southern USA.

      Hope to you see there ... : )

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I wish.... I feel an expressive comment coming on...

      two southern beauties

      sat on porch.. so nigh ...

      underneath the sparkling sky

      how I wish.... I was there ..

      with southern magnolia's in the air

      making it ...all so much more sweet

      Jackie and Faith ..

      what a sweet treat!

      Love... Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Awwee, very lovely ... you are too kind, and that was a hint, as you can truly join me here on my front porch where Jackie was earlier this day ...

      Thank you for the beautiful poetry in a comment, and shall direct Jackie over this way, so she will receive a blessing too.

      With such sweet words, who needs the sweet tea!

      Have a lovely evening,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh my faithfull Tree..

      I think that I will never see

      she who is as lovely..

      as my faithful Tree

      her beauty is such the divine ..

      my faithful Tree ...is one of a kind

      now I must dream ...of her tonight ..

      when I will be..holding her tight .

      so wait for me ...my Faithfull Tree

      I pledge my heart ...to you it will be

      Michael

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Michael how did I miss this beauty?? what wonderful poetry.. you are a true artist.

      many blessings to you

      Debbie

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Deborah

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      Demas W Jasper 3 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Creative juices flowing here. sources for the photos?

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Very beautiful poem and you are all out to pour all goodness and love into the hearts of all tender souls. Lovely piece, cleaner3. This poem evokes pious and affectionate feelings.

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      A masterpiece! Ah! Love... love... love it! So much depth and endearment. How did I miss this? Much love.

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      cleaner3 17 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for commenting my dear friend.. Surabhi

      I would love to converse with you ... send me an e mail if you would please... an intelligent woman you are... I see from your profile..

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      Sure, my Dear friend Michael. It's surabhikaura@yahoo.com

      Peace.

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