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Just Once - A Poem

Updated on January 15, 2014

Once

Just once.
To look in your eyes.

Just once.
To touch your cheek.

Just once.
To hear you speak.

Just once.
Is all I need.

At once.
You will know.

At once.
You are home.

At once.
You know it's me.

That once.
Is all I need.

Once


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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      good work

      voted up...and all

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Beautiful.

      Voted up.

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you dghbrh !!!

      Thank you Michele!, thank you very much!!! *blushes*

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      Lilly 4 years ago from Denmark

      Simple and beautiful :) Great poem CriticalMessage!

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you Phelky !!! *smiles*

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Lovely poem, well done.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hehehe all my votes CM :) nice one.

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Jo & spy ? Just know how much I truly appreciate both of yours recognition... Flattering indeed! *blushes*

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Simple but meaningful..... :)

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      *smiles*,, Thank you LaThing !

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      just once.... love your title CM and the poem is wonderful..votes!!

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank You snowdrops !!!! *blushes*

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      Derrick Bennett 4 years ago

      Nice peom lovely title

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      Saishasethi 4 years ago from India

      i like it ! :D

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you 'confident'! Thank you Saishasethi !.. Thank you both very much!

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      Sam 4 years ago from Tennessee

      Most captivating. Voted up and interesting...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, once is enough...

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank You Sam!,, Thank You Ruby! ... your recognition shared is greatly appreciated !!!

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      Jennifer Stone 4 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      Lovely! :-) Thanks... *voting and sharing*.. Jen

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Mmmmmmm...at once i am entranced! sexy...

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      *GRINS*... Thank you Leslie!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Now this was awesome! Great poem and I have to share this:) What a funny picture! Voted up, funny, and awesome. Creative genius.

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you 'tlw'... *smiles*

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      true! Loved the last line! Voted up!

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you Bell !!!.. Thank you for your kind consideration shared here... *smiles*

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      ExoticHippieQueen 4 years ago

      Like...............

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank You !!! *BLUSHES*

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      JyurriOukan 4 years ago

      Lovely poem, much better than any of mine.

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Thank you Jyurri... Thank you very much !... *blushes*

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