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Lullaby's Song

Updated on December 1, 2016
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Interwoven into

Many facets

Strung and

Tied together

Time passes

Flowers enmeshed

And tangled

Around

The lullaby's song is

Always in tune

It brings me to

A sleepy slumber

Under the

Full moon

Where my dreams

Give rise

One after another

Lace spun slowly

Gentle and delicate

From a mistress spider

Weaved in a

Fashioned etiquette

The lullaby's song in

It's dreamy haze

Entrenched in deep sleep

Through my mind's maze

Where will it take me

Next

I still don't know

So many levels and

Mysteries bestow

Deeper and deeper

I fall through the dust

Wrapped up in it's coils

Sealed by it's rust

The path it takes me on

I cannot decipher

Only to be led by

My mind's piper

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Cleaner yes you can.

      Tom lol.

      Senoritaa thank you, wishing you a good night's sleep too. :)

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Another brilliant one Caroline. Wish you a good night's sleep. :)

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      c21,

      Ahhh i suck..*snicker*

      TH

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline could I use your pic. in a poetry hub? Please, I'll send it to you first to read if you want to see it before I publish.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Tom - lol Good analyzation, but it's not sleeping in the woods or greenhouse. It's talking about the idea of sleep and the whole mind experience comparing it to the beauty of nature and how everything has it's certain order or cycle of life. Thank you for reading and your comments!

      @ Hi Cleaner yes I did change my photo. I got bored of having the other one. Thanks for the compliment!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, Thank you for the info.

      You know I'll give you your props

      for the question that was asked.

      I'm waiting for your next hub

      anticipation is a blast

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      A beautiful woman you are

      did you change your picture on your bio?

      For some strange reason you look different

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      *TH raises his hand*

      um carolinemd questions-

      was your poem about sleeping in the woods?

      at night?

      or is it a dream of sleeping in the woods?

      there is defibitely slumber... it sounds like your just sleeig out in the open under the moon and stars so maybe your sleeping in a greenhouse?

      i have another question but its even to cheesy to say

      TH

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Always!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful Caroline..The title, very unique..

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Cheryl. :)

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      Cheryl Simonds 5 years ago from Connecticut

      Very creative and beautiful, and the picture....well...what can I say but that it matches the poem perfectly. :)

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Cleaner thanks for the support!

      @ Hi Debbie wow that was the best compliment. Makes me feel good about sharing these. :)

      @ SubRon thank you! Missed you around.

      @ Sky my friend thank you for your support. I am glad you liked it!

      @ Raciniwa Thank you!

      @ Gypsy thank you for the constant support. I appreciate it. :)

      @ Mathira thank you!

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      mathira 5 years ago from chennai

      You were expressive carolinemd21.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      That was creatively put Caroline and such a beautiful free flowing poem that the thought of a lullaby makes me feel so peaceful and calm. Love that picture at the beginning.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      this is amazing...a lullaby song will lull me to sleep...

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Hi there Caroline I see you are experimenting with the richt meter, something like that ! Too lazy to look it up .But you will understand. The poem flows nicely and it feels you! and I love the pic as always.

      Bless.

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Just catching up, Caroline, I will just agree with Deborah Brooks.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Caroline..what can I say...wow you out did yourself..just beautiful...I am so glad I am following you...you are very talented and very inspiring...I voted up and awesome and beautiful..debbie

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Cut me open,

      look at the hole

      reach deep inside me,

      touch my soul

      your words are great

      So beautiful are they

      like good food on a plate

      Thank you, you are awesome!!!!!!!

      What a picture.!!