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Let’s resume our love!

Updated on March 24, 2015

Red-pencilling

the grandiloquence of my love proposal

here I stand

with prosaic utterance!?

Look ye, love!

Feel I in my bones,

this very moment

need we

to put our heads together

to work on deodorizing our affair;

our depiction of love

so far

has gone bonkers,

needless to say;

ought to first analyse

chronologically

the records of transactions of feelings

for further venture;

emote not your displeasure

at this very instant;

would do more harm

your negligent attitude

to our already ill-hammered relationship!

Come, dear sweet-heart!

Let’s repair the wound

To reciprocate love

liberally!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq jan for this motivation

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      Janis Leslie Evans 2 years ago from Washington, DC

      This poem jumped out at me in the hubfeed. I like its spark and strong use of metaphor. Delightful, sujaya. I love a good beg. Voted up and interesting.