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The toils of life will seem nothing.....

Updated on October 18, 2012

This inspiration came to mind, after reading a hub by: Jackie Lynnley " The Seasons of our Lives"

When your love ones walked out the door,

your heart breaks an slump to the floor.

When people don't say hello to you no more

and sickness knocks at your door. Or someone

precious to you dies unexpectedly and you just

sink in despair, sometimes wondering LORD

why did you let this ever happened to me.

When you lose the best job you ever had

or something you wished you could cherish forever.

When you were adopted by the lady next door,

When people seem to care no more,

when dreams and wishes never came

through, when life seems to only pelt

lemon at you and every time you try to

rise up you just keep falling to the floor.

When the windows of your soul shatters

and every ray of light seems like there is

no hope. When agony strikes like a dart through your

soul, when you do lovely things that will never

be told.

When decisions you made have ruined your

entire life. When evil memories torment your

mind and you wish that you can find a place,

to hide to get some peace of mind.

When the soars of life covers you from head

to toe, when trials follow you every where you go.

Just remember that life is like drawing without

and eraser, and no matter where you run or try

to hide it will haunt you until you bid this world goodbye.

Someday these troubles will be over and we'll suffer

no more. The toils of the road will seem nothing when

i get to the end of the way. When with Christ our wonderful Saviour,

we'd rein forever and ever.

Written by: Joanna Chandler

Copyright © October 18th ,2012


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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Wonderful poetry. At first I was reminded of loss but then was redeemed. Jamie

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Troy thanks so much for coming by, glad you liked it.

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      Troyangeluk 5 years ago from UK

      although this is quite doom and gloom 90% throughout the valid point at the end makes it worth reading :) thankyou for sharing this i enjoyed it.

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi eddy, happy you came by, see me at your profile soon

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A great hub my friend.


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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Oh thank you shiningirisheyes

      God bless your soul

      Have a wonderful weekend

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You did a wonderful and telling job reminding us what is important in this world.

      Great write

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Faith Reaper thanks a billion and God will bless you for spreading your faith with other's continue to walk on the right part He'd see you through.

      Hey Jackie yes it sure did get here fast. Thanks for stopping by my friend.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Wow I am so pleased my poem inspired this, it is so beautiful dear one. I love you and your beautiful heart.

      This really got here fast, didn't it? lol So everyone must think it is great!

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Stunningly beautiful and profound piece, and I, too, had just read Jackie's poem from which you were inspired. As I commented on Jackie's poem, that day will come when there will be no more tears, and we will get to walk with our loved ones on those streets of gold, but until that day, we must persevere to love and be loved no matter what this life throws at us. Voted Way Up

      God bless you. In His Love, Faith Reaper