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Liquid Fire

Updated on October 20, 2012
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I lost you

Somewhere in between

Heaven and hell

Ruined heart

Ruined mind

My life's aching from below me

This liquid fire has me up at night

Thinking about you



For something

To happen

For something

To come

Save me from this nightmare

This despised reality

Each night the swords pierce

From all sides

Making me bleed


I think of you

Your cheap desire

How you fooled me

Into love

How you made me believe

Then you were gone

Someone else took your place

A monster

With no reason

Someone filled with hate

So you left me alone here

With my thoughts


The days and nights

Last a lot longer

When you're not around

I wished you loved me

My heart is torn from the inside

All I feel is stinging pain

Burning deep inside

Tearing me from limb to limb

And you don't give a damn

You are off

Who knows where

Maybe in the next life

I can be what you desire

Dance through the night

With liquid fire


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Ruby thank you! Yes it can. Cheers. )

      Hi Frank thanks so much. :)

      Hi Integrity thank you very much! :)

      Hi Eiddwen thank you! Enjoy your day! :)

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant and thank you for sharing this gem.

      Great work and enjoy your day.


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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      That rocks and I definitely voted up.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      drawn and emotional write here I love it!!!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, Beautiful Caroline! I guess a broken heart can burn like liquid fire?............................Cheers..