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Littered Floors

Updated on April 29, 2015
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

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My #28 for National Poetry Month


we move toward happiness

without knowing it.

hands touching

the laundry of our lives

folding away visions

protecting dreams,

gazing out toward the sky.


i can feel the tenderness of you

in the morning coffee mug

held between greedy fists.

the lines of our lives

intersecting in patterns

that make leaves dance on the floor

in late afternoons

cascading in patterns around us,

like dandelion seeds

blowing across the lawn

each destined to implant its own joy

among the grasses.


sometimes when you whisper my name

across the dreams

i have pinned up to dry

i can feel the tug of you

deep inside me

in that place

where the soul lodges i think.

and then i know

that when you came to me

i had crushed my lottery ticket

so much the richer.



copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 20115


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      Bill Holland 24 months ago from Olympia, WA

      All of your poems have at least one line that is exquisite..."the laundry of our lives." Love it!

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      drbj and sherry 24 months ago from south Florida

      Meaningful and beautiful, Audrey - all at the same time. You have a poetic soul, m'dear, and it shows.

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      mckbirdbks 24 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Each swirl of your pen stirs us.

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      Frank Atanacio 24 months ago from Shelton

      I like the poem Audrey but I really love the title :) awesome

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      ArtDiva 24 months ago

      Two more, your goal to meet. You can do it, sitting with pen and notebook in hand, filling pages with words in poetic construct. Just two more.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 24 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Lovely poem with deep feelings of love!

      Thanks and voted up!

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      Nithya Venkat 24 months ago from Dubai

      Loved your poem, you have a unique way of expressing and I love that about your writings. Always enjoy reading your poems. Voted up.

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      Joanna Chandler 24 months ago from On planet Earth

      Nicely done Audrey :)

      Keep on writing lovely poems as you always do.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 24 months ago from Reno NV

      Beautiful introspective poetry about a relationship that has stood the test of time. Thank you Audrey. I am getting caught up on my reading today at lunch. :) Jamie

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      Ruchira 24 months ago from United States

      Loved it, Audrey!

      You expressed this so beautifully and in such few words cause life can never be summarized and you did it well :)

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      Linda Rogers 24 months ago from Minnesota

      My goodness Audrey-your poetry always leaves me in awe. I love how you use such powerful images in your words. Voted up and hit many buttons.

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      vasantha T k 24 months ago from Bangalore

      nice poem expressions are beautiful.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 24 months ago from The Caribbean

      Beautiful throughout with a surprising happy ending. Really shouldn't be any surprise to get great poetry from you.

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      Venkatachari M 24 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Beautiful poem with great feelings of love and relationships.

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      Vivian Sudhir 24 months ago from Madurai, India

      Very nice writing voted up. Good work. The share buttons are gone! Or am I looking at the wrong place?

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      Graham Lee 23 months ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Audrey. Beautiful and so wistful. A lovely ending as well. I enjoyed it . Thank you.

      Graham.

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      ahorseback 23 months ago

      I love this style of poetry and yet do I write like this , not even !....Awesome !

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      Audrey Howitt 23 months ago from California

      Hey Frank! Thank you!

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      Deb Hirt 23 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Definitely top notch. This gives me a moment of serenity, if you will for your chance ticket paid off.

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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      Thank you Graham--I liked this one--sometimes the writing comes more easily

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      Audrey Howitt 18 months ago from California

      Thank you LadyFiddler!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you so much Minnetonka! How are you???

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Ruchira! Hope you are well!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Bill!!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Mike!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Jamie!

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      poetryman6969 13 months ago

      Love the image and the words.

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      Audrey Howitt 11 months ago from California

      Thank you Chitrangada!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      thank you drbj!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you ArtDiva!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Vellur!!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      You are kind MsDora! And thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you deb!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Ed!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Snerfu!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Venkatachari!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 months ago from California

      Thank you vasantha!

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      Mary Norton 2 months ago from Ontario, Canada

      Just love this...it touches the heart.

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      Audrey Howitt 8 weeks ago from California

      Thank you aesta1!

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