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Lollipop

Updated on May 15, 2011
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By FranUlloa on Flickr


I want to be a lollipop

A swirling twirling bright confection

Tightly bound in a cellophane dress

Tauntingly displayed beyond wayward hands

Eyes hungrily dancing over me

I watch as they go by

I long for the perfect set

Full soft lips to wrap around me

Glistening and tender

Their yearning is matched by my own

The lucky one who procures me

Cradles me with delight

Inhales my deliciousness

And readies his tongue

Firm, slick and strong

It drags across my sweetness

With every stroke, I die a little more

The ecstasy of being consumed is all I know

I care not of tomorrow

Kill me, lick by lick


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    • Randy Behavior profile image
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      Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Take me with you!!! Oh, wait I guess in a way you are :) Someday though I will make it to Burning Man. I feel like I need to go with someone well seasoned though. (check "Play with Me" you may like that also) Have a blast thanks for taking a part of me with you!

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      Heather 5 years ago

      Mmm sweet words! I plan on reciting your work as part of performance art at Burning Man. I will give credit to the artist of course. Thanks!

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      That's funny, you're digging deeper than I was writing for once. Reminds me of this quote: "Life is a disease: sexually transmitted, and invariably fatal."

      — Neil Gaiman

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      "with each lick, I die a little more" -- great line for the frolicking lighter side of this poem, but also deep with existential meaning. With each lick, each stroke, each breath, each blink of our eye -- are we not dying a little more? Maybe I just need to stop reading so much into stuff -- but I can't help it!

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      When I saw I had a comment I assumed it was for the poem I just posted, not this old confection. :)

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      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      I had to come back and read again...

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I thought you'd appreciate the sweet metaphor. ;)

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      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      WooHoo! RandyOne!....that's some slick poetry and I like it! Makes me wanna go down town for a lollipop right now! WB

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh CC, you know I get all confused when you behave!

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      i think i shall behave myself now and just say . . .great writing girl.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I'm afraid MFB, I'm bringing out the puns in you.

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      MFB III 7 years ago from United States

      There is nothing like a good tongue lashing, turning all that is sweetest into one's pacifier and pacifying the one getting suckled...LOL~ i was always a sucker for such randy behavior...MFB III

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks AIDY, I need help with this stuff.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      xD is a laughing so hard face... the 'x' is the eyes tightly shut and the 'D' is the mouth, so

      xD = something really funny!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      lol.

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      Clive Fagan 8 years ago from South Africa

      Yea well as the kid in the candy store says to the proprieter "just Licking"! LOL

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      AIDY what does xD mean? See what I mean by dorks?

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      xD ROFL! No, no, no, no!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks Lgali!

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      Lgali 8 years ago

      wow very nice hub

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hey siixtyorso, nice to see you here. What kind pictures could it possibly put in your head???? Maybe a candy store. *wink*

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      Clive Fagan 8 years ago from South Africa

      Took a while to get here. I am beginning to catch up. Great Poem lovely wicked inuendo. Video is great but don't let pest get near this one. He mght do another hub that gets banned LOL.

      I like the pictures that this poem puts into my head.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      No, lol, I was talking about this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C74zQXwShdM

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      oh! if you mean the same video, it is them (Framing Hanley) in both parts of the video above xD I thought you were talking about the 'original' artist of Lollipop 'Lil Wayne' this is his song, the group I posted 'Lollipop' "copied" the original artist see here:

      ==>ORIGINAL 'OFFICAL' singer of 'Lollipop.' by Lil Wayne http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqDBa11MuDo

      'Framing Hanley' "copied" the original song, to fit their style. Which is the video on your 'Lollipop' on your hub xD

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      AIDY, that explains why they where dorky in the first... not the same guys. That makes me like Framing Hanley even more... since they weren't dorks before they were sexy hot, shew. lol.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      -teehee- 'Framing Hanley' don't know what I was thinking about...gotta stop reading this poem, it is fierce.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      ROFL!! The original is by Lil Waye and I did not like at all! Since the above group "Flaming Hanley' is more in my genre, their cover is wicked awesome! I knew better than to use the original...! It's not the same guys/group. 'Flaming Hanley" done the cover of the song...which is wayyyyyyyy betta xD

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      AIDY, I can't believe you are just now getting back here to see that video up! I put it up that night you suggested it. I come listen to it often. I listened to an early version of it and didn't like it at all. Something about the way he was saying "hump" I didn't like. It doesn't even look like the same guys... I guess they grew up and got sexy.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      =o umm, just checking out my fav poems from my fav poets, and I just now noticed the link to an awesome video xD.

      Randy! I just now noticed you done this ROFL!!! so you like the video xD??

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Let it be what you would prefer J. Thanks for the critique. Yes, Randy I am.

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      J. Stump 8 years ago from USA

      RB this isn't recycled its fresh like milk from the utter. haha. now i like the fact that i can't decide from reading it a few times if you the sucker want to be kissed to death or other thing's involving stuff i dont do unless it's post shower or she had a bad day. Its refreshing to be able to make my own decision and read it with that in mind

      really good stuff RB you truly are a randy one

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Awe, (blush) thank you LM. Kinda the pot calling the kettle black though. :)

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      Laughing Mom 8 years ago

      Oh wow!! I think I had better keep my thoughts to myself.

      You're a talented one, Randy.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh PM what has happened to your vocabulary?

      FB, is that your face? You are a beauty!

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      Frieda Babbley 8 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

      And what are you gasping at PM?

      I agree with Crazy Wonderful Randy.

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      Paper Moon 8 years ago from In the clouds

      :O gasp gasp

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Jewels, yes I can tell you're a pro in the make em drool department!

      Hey KCC! I promised Men Are Dorks a "sweet" poem appropriate for his daughter... it obviously went awry. :)

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      KCC Big Country 8 years ago from Central Texas

      Wow! Death by licking....who wouldn't want to be ya? Very nice RandyB! Sensually sexy and sassy, I love it!

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      It was my intention.  Like putty they are.  Oh to be so powerful! :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      You know you just made a dozen men or so gasp, right Jewels. :)

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      Yeah, they're round, not flat and you can put it all in your mouth at once.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Paper Moon, :P

      Jewels, I'm guessing that's a lollipop? And you must now, have sucking down to a science. LOL.

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      Jewels 8 years ago from Australia

      I used to have a barrel of chuppa chumps. I sucked everyone of em. Yummm.

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      Paper Moon 8 years ago from In the clouds

      :O

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      R. Blue 8 years ago from Right here

      RB...You just can't change a Zebra's stripes.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Yes Blue I thought this was right up your alley. You can pretend anything you want. I actually wrote it as an attempt not to be randy for a change... didn't work.

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      R. Blue 8 years ago from Right here

      You surely must have written this with me in mind...I'm going to pretend you did anyway. I've been a bit behind on my reading and glad you brought it to my attention. I am after all....all about licking. I've memorized this one .....you can give me an oral exam later.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Manly I can just seeing you busting a gut in a candy store and everyone thinking you've lost your marbles. lol.

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      manlypoetryman 8 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Nothing but...pleasant associations, RB!(and a snicker or too!)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Ya, isn't it great. Am I Dead Yet turned me on to it.

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      trooper22 8 years ago from Chicago

      Great Video as well. A rocker girl.... O M G!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Manly, I hope that is a pleasant association for you. ;)

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      manlypoetryman 8 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Should I see a lollipop again...I will only be able to think of what this poem said at the end!!!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Did you check out the video Pauli? And my pic? Added them since you were here last.

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      men are dorks 8 years ago from Namibia

      Deff a candy lover me... Especially if she is sweet.

      ... and the self potrait at the end, damn i want to be that candy, randy... LOL

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      The same way my lips and the lollipop I stole from my daughters candy jar got on here!

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      Not Telling 8 years ago from Eastern Nowhere

      How did that film of my last house party get on a YouTube music video?

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hawk, You think Hubbers tend to be candy lovers?

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      Hawkesdream 8 years ago from Cornwall

      Great Poem Randy, dare say there are a number of folks would have a lollipop if you were one!!!!!!!!!!!!lol

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks for encouraging me to got off my ass and add it, and here I was thinking of going to bed.

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      WhiskeyChick 8 years ago from North of Somewhere

      Sweet video addition!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      You must be a patient man.... I like that.

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      The Captain 8 years ago from The Carribean

      Errrr...I know how many licks it takes to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh Captain I didn't know you could sing! What other talents are you hiding?

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      The Captain 8 years ago from The Carribean

      Lollypop, lollypop, oh lolly lollypop, lollypop, lollypop, oh lolly lollypop!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      WC - Thanks for the great comment. I don't think I've gotten a "crazy wonderful" before.

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      WhiskeyChick 8 years ago from North of Somewhere

      Crazy wonderful!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Trooper22, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope your wife enjoys the attention :)

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      trooper22 8 years ago from Chicago

      Ok, after reading this I think I am going to have to turn off this computer for a while see if my wife feels like a Lollipop! Great flow, and feeling. YUM!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Tom don't pretend to be a prude with me. I've read I can fly and others. Or did I just imagine that...

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      Tom Rubenoff 8 years ago from United States

      Whoa, what's going on here? Well, looks tasty!

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      men are dorks 8 years ago from Namibia

      I' not always dorky....

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      You're welcome Pauli.  I was expecting a more sarcastic comment, but I'll take a thank you. :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks for coming by Eyes.

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      men are dorks 8 years ago from Namibia

      Thank you... You are sweet. Copy - paste print again. xxx

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      EYES CHAMbERS 8 years ago

      very interesting!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Your sweet. "Azur was here" works for me too. No worries :)

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      Azur Moon Wolf 8 years ago

      I have read figment - twice in fact! I'm ashamed to say I did not comment on it either time - my only excuse would be speechlessness. A mere "well done" wouldn't have done it justice. You have such a way with words.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      If you read my figment poem, you'll have to agree that gardeners of secret gardens are also right up there with wine! lol.

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      Azur Moon Wolf 8 years ago

      I was trying to be discreet...I failed miserably! :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hmmmm, sex didn't make it on your list, unless that's what you meant by lollipops? :)

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      Azur Moon Wolf 8 years ago

      Exactly! The best things in life being lollipops, good wine and gourmet chocolates, of course!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      "Deliciously Sinful" as is with the best things in life, eh? Azur?

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      Azur Moon Wolf 8 years ago

      "Kill me, lick by lick" - Deliciously Sinful. Loved it!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Not Telling - A salty lollipop, you must be confusing this poem with something else.

      Cindy - Or a girl who likes girls on a stick.

      KP - Only "in a way sensual?" I'll try to be more obvious next time then.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Shame - Sorry to make you miss love. I'm obviously missing something myself or would not have written this. :)

      Bad - This poem is about candy, what do jeans have to do with it? I am perplexed. *wink*

      Miss De Vine - I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

      Cabin Girl - I'd rather be the lickee than the licker.

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      Not Telling 8 years ago from Eastern Nowhere

      I'm "not telling"

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      Kushal Poddar 8 years ago from Kolkata,India

      Brilliant and in a way sensual.

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      Cindy Vine 8 years ago from Cape Town

      Ok, so No Telling must be a guy....

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      Not Telling 8 years ago from Eastern Nowhere

      I will gladly lick you until you say to stop

      Colorful lovely sweet and salty lollipop

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      CabinGirl 8 years ago

      I luv licking a nice big lolly, like to twirl my tongue round it really slow so I can savour it. Nice poem Randy !!

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      Cindy Vine 8 years ago from Cape Town

      RB, great imagery of, er....a lollipop being licked

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      badcompany99 8 years ago

      " Kill me, lick by lick ".....Jeeeeeeeeeeeez drop the jeans the ship is going full speed ; )

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      shamelabboush 8 years ago

      Oh my oh my oh my!!! How can I put that? It's extremely warm, teasing, sense-tingling and sensational poem.! I, for the first time, missed love... You made me picture you as a lollipop dear...

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Chris, slowly dissolving :) I've never had the patience it takes for them. Perhaps that's why I want to be one.

      AIDY, Maybe because its Spring? I'm just answering the call of the season. Even the beetles on my porch are getting it on. lol.

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Gypsy, Very pleased to wow you.

      Not Telling, I hope its sweet. I promised Men are Dorks that instead of a randy poem, my next one would be about lollipops. Voila!

      Cris, Oops got my capsules askew, fixed em. Floored you? That delights me.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      oh my, what is going on with these spicy hubs XD! Awesome Randy, always a fiery way to start off for the holiday weekend.

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      Christoph Reilly 8 years ago from St. Louis

      Yowza!  I like lollipops.  You've made me think about how I would like one right now.  Sweet and dissolving slowly in my mouth!

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      RB

      I almost missed the poem below, that pic was just too much! But but BUT it's the poetry that ultimately floored me! :D

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      Not Telling 8 years ago from Eastern Nowhere

      This is precious. Not a bad way to go, hmm?

      Now for tat.