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Lonesome star why don't you come on home

Updated on October 15, 2012

Lonesome star, why do you twinkle all alone in this universe? Why does it seem like all the other stars has drift so far away and left you all alone.

The sky is very dark and you look miles away from your home. The moon is shinning its light, perhaps for you to go on home tonight. Oh lonesome star!! Why don't you come on home?

Lonesome star are you afraid to twinkle your way all alone. Is there something you wish to say? Maybe i can help you pray and the show you the way, oh lonesome star you've got to hurry now, the rain is about to come yourway.

Oh lonesome star why don't you come on home? I've prepared a lovely place for you to stay.

Written by : Joanna Chandler

copyright 2012


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    • LadyFiddler profile image

      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      I feel like this star right now :(

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      What a Wonderful poem - and so Sweet! Voted Up & Awesome.

      Oh yes I like the pictures too!

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Epi

      Hmmm sometimes i feel just like that star that's why i was motivated to write that poem. Thanks to Jesus he comes around and takes the feeling away.

      Thanks for coming by.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ..well Joanna you are a shining star yourself and you will never be lonely when you write so purely and lovely like this ..... and it gave me goosebumps all over ..... sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 5:12am

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi polly thanks much ;)

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      Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

      Very sweet poem. Stars do seem lonely sometimes, don't they? Can't share this since the button is not up yet but will vote you up. Have a great weekend!