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Love Diamonds

Updated on July 27, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

My love

I saw you standing there

Your eyes locked with mine

I knew right then

That we were one

And during that night

In the dim twilight

You drew me close to you

And I already knew

My heart belonged to you

Every day that passed me by

I waited patiently for you

To come to me

So we can be free together

I waited for you to take me away

From all things that seemed

So dreary and dark

Some nights seemed endless

As I waited

You finally came and

Swept me away

And we danced in the dark

Like two lovers unrestrained

Diamonds sparkling at midnight


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ H Gypsy thank you :)

      @ Hi Myownlife thank you :)

      @ Hi Jim thank you :)

      @ Hi Tom thank you lol :)

      @ Hi Cheryl thank you :)

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      oh that Tom Hellert what a wordsmith .. maybe even a wordjones wordchang...? nitwitt?

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      Tom Hellert not signed in 5 years ago


      Isnt it amazing the exact same stuff- more or less that makes charcoal, is the exact same stuff that makes diamonds...straight up Carbon...This still does not take the "shine" off your lovely work.


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      Cheryl Simonds 5 years ago from Connecticut

      Beautifully romantic.

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      Tom Hellert 5 years ago

      smooth like sandpaper thats me

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      You're back, Caroline, with more beautiful poetry. This one is special, as it sounds like a "best" love.

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      myownlife 5 years ago from london

      fantastic imagination, brilliant work.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Now that was really beautiful. Your words shine like sparkling diamonds. Passing this on.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Sonison thank you for your lovely comment. :)

      @ Curiad thank you very much! :)

      @ XStatic thank you for your kind words. :)

      @ Robwrite thank you very much. :)

      @ Tom LOL u are still smooth. :)

      @ Michael thank you! :)

      @ Mckbirdbks thank you so much! :)

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      You set just the right mood.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado


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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home


      ya ya ya typical girl... its all about the diamond-*smirk* to look for the most spectacular sparkles look no further than your own eyes.. oh I used to be smooth..*lol*


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      Rob 5 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

      Hi Caroline; Great imagery. Nicely done,


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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      "Diamonds sparkling at midnight." What a beautiful metaphor for lovers. Up and all but funny!

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      beautiful thoughts Caroline.

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      sonison 5 years ago from Heaven 7

      NO wonder why diamonds are the ladies best friend. Sparklingly brilliant hub.