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Love Is Elegant

Updated on March 11, 2010

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 I  lie calm as my heart beat returns to normal

My wife stirs to awake

I slide over to her space hiding behind the blanket

I rest my arms exposed on the outside of my body

Refreshed after my engine has stopped out of gas so to speak

I feel great comfort  as my true nature radiates

Time has come to a halt

I have found a place unsurpassed

I feel like a fish basking in the sun

No words to mention to describe the spectacular performance that has been achieved

Both fullfilled and true to ourself

The events communicated beyond words

We have sweetened what was already wonderful 


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      birus70 I enjoy sharing the love that I feel.Aya_Hajime I keep trying.Thanks for eenjoying.

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      Aya_Hajime 7 years ago

      Very nicely said. You have a great way with words.

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      boris70 7 years ago from Slovenia

      Lovley =)

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Micky Dee Love is shared often and I love that it is endless.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very nice again! Thanks!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I love people who just seem to fit together like putting on your favorite pair of sneakers.No thought required just at home each time and you feel like you never left.I think you show incredible love for each other.I could listen and enjoy watching couples forever who without a doubt have found love. There are many distractions in life that can bring us elsewhere.But after a few hugs I know exactly where I want to be.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Poetlorraine She was flattered you thought of her.I think we all try to be the best we can be.I like to think she brings the best of me out.I couldn't do half of what I do each day without her guidance and help.She is someone who I complement often and rightfully so.I am a little to positive at times and I have to realize everyone is there own person.I just want her to see how great life is.She gets so mad when things don't go right.She is my world and I like to think my world is incredible!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Sounds like you have a wonderful relationship. Beautifully written. Thank you.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      please say hello to your wife, she sounds like a wonderful woman, .

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      artrush73 thanks for reading.

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      artrush73 7 years ago

      Great Poem ;)

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Truth From Truth Nice to see you ...

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      Truth From Truth 7 years ago from Michigan

      Nice work, thank you for sharing.