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Love Notes For Her

Updated on December 5, 2010

Love Notes For Her

I couldn't find myself anywhere,

Don't remember where I was,

Always lost in your thought,

As if my soul is yours,

I am searching myself in your big beautiful eyes,

Want to listen to my soul through your voice,

But I couldn't find myself.

May be because your eyes are like sea,

Deep and unending,

Like time and eternity.

And your voice,

So lively and vibrant,

Doesn't allow me to think about myself.

Your long black shining hair,

Are like dense jungles,

If lost, one can never conquer.

I have given up the hope that I can find myself,

So be with me and don't leave me in pain and despair.

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      vishal.rossi 4 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      It's good that your gf is happy and you are still together. As for me, this poems means nothing more than a piece of writing now.

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      Aveshnear 5 years ago

      Man this is awsome my gf is so happy when I told her this that's y I think she's still with me! Thanks may God Bless You and your family! :)

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      vishal.rossi 5 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      just mention her that your friend has written it and u like it..

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      who dat 5 years ago

      send me to mars and call me a marsh-in that was beautiful

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      who dat 5 years ago

      send me to mars and call me a marhsin that was beautiful

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      ............ 5 years ago

      thats awesome im going to give it to my crush

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      Ingenira 6 years ago

      Nice work. Beautiful. :)

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      Pranjal Sharma 6 years ago

      One thing we can never receive enough is love,

      One thing we can never give enough is...... love!! :)

      May your love and inspiration grows from strength to strength.... someone with such words deserves lots :) :)

      God bless you! :)

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      Pranjal Sharma 6 years ago

      well written vishal.... Kp goin on & on..... :)

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      Payal Rawat 6 years ago

      Vishal Cool yaar u write so well!!!! in a single word WOW!!!

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      Riddhi Hathiwala 6 years ago

      vry beautiful vishal... i loved the meaning of the poem...

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      thanks :)

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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      Very warm and tender thoughts of love from the heart. Your girl is lucky to be the receiver of such high praise and devotion. Beautiful love poem, vishal.rossi. :D

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      thanks Dsouza and Acaetnna

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      This is so beautiful. To receive a love not like this would be heaven.

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      Dsouza 6 years ago

      Hey Vishal, well done buddy, Who is your inspiration??

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      will try to more things which i can share every now and then....like you

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      thanks for the correction...

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      saket71 6 years ago from Delhi, India

      Very well written, Sonam. Can see you are getting some really rave reviews. one small edit, consider changing "Doesn't allow me of thinking about myself." to "Doesn't allow me to think about myself" but then when emotions are guiding, grammer can be forgiven..very well written, must write more.

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      M.Ray 6 years ago

      Excellent expression in search of love.

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      thanks Mark

      will reconsider your thought

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      Mark Bronze 6 years ago

      Nicely composed. Well done. Lets have some more!

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      vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland

      i wrote it....but i cant marry u....sorry

      :)

      thanks for your comment

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      Laura 6 years ago

      i am a girl:

      who wrote this? it is so beautiful. i would marrysomebody who wrote me that. ;)