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Love and It's Mirrored Reflection

Updated on June 19, 2013

I See

Don't say your eyes are not lovely.

When they look at me,

I see their depth.


Don't say your hands are clumsy.

When they touch me,

I feel perfect dexterity.


Don't say your voice is not wonderful.

When it whispers in my ear,

it vibrates to my exact frequency and pitch.


Don't say your mouth is inarticulate.

When your lips find mine,

I feel their poetry.


Don't say your features are not strong.

When I look I see years of love and strength,

looking back at me.


And what I see is beautiful.


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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      yess... this is beautiful expression from your words .

      I like my poems sort of short .. i feel if you can put what you want to express in a few words ..they are more poerful . Keep up the good work .

      michael

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you! Many of my poems are kind of short. I always appreciate your specific comments!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Beautiful write--each stanza works--and the close is great--

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you audrey, I am honored that you enjoyed it, thank you again for your visit!

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      Erika 4 years ago

      Wonderful poem! So much truth to how lovers see each other too.

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      Kristen Mazzola 4 years ago from South Florida

      Beautiful! The flow and voice is great! Voted up!

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      @embarrett...Thank you! I have seen you on here and on your dad's page...thank you for the visit the compliment!

      @khmazz....I am glad that you liked it..this has been one that I was not sure if people would enjoy....I am glad you did...and I will visit you as well!

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      Kelly Gross Tyler 4 years ago from Walker, Louisiana

      Enjoyed it! :)

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Kelly for stopping by!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Self reflection and loves embodiment. beautiful poetry!

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Theater girl

      "Don't say your mouth is inarticulate.

      When your lips find mine,

      I feel their poetry."

      Wonderful imagery! Love this one.

      Voted up and away

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      @ waynebarrett thank you so very much for you kind words and visit!

      @sueswan thanks for stopping by and so soon! I am glad you appreciated the poem !

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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Beautiful reflections in this poem. Thank you.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you for your visit and kind words!

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Brilliantly done....votes up and shared.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you! This is about a very special person to me, so I am glad that you thought it was done well! Thanks for the visit and the sharing!

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      ANIL KUMAR UPADHYAY 3 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY

      What a lovely poem with the depth of it's beauty. Liked it and enjoyed much. Thanks for sharing it. One of my poems is also based on almost the same topic, to which you will like to read :-

      https://hubpages.com/literature/Playing-with-mirro...

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      I will check it out! I love when other poets direct me to their work! This is an intensely personal poem...and your kind comments are humbling to myself and it's subject. Blessings to you!

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