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Love at 59

Updated on January 27, 2015
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

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i wanted to drink in your potency,

a measure of heat

blazing in subcutaneous tissue,

a swelling in my abdominal wall

finding its way toward you

in the exotic blend of cacophonous snorts and grunts

that comprise

the symphony of our nighttime environs--

a denouement of love

that stops short of tales told

of princes and dewy cheeks and such.

It is enough now

that you take the time

to cook dinner

as i fall into this poem,

a glass of wine and your scent

filling the bed

like a mosquito net of love.



Copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2015


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      Lori Colbo 2 years ago from Pacific Northwest

      "exotic blend of cacophonous snorts and grunts." Interesting. Good work here Audrey.

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      From the sublime to the practical; great poem, Audrey!

      Ann

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Love is in the air, dededelala. Way to go. I loved this Audrey!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      thank you so much lambservant, annart and Ruby!

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      Bill Holland 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I needed a dictionary as I read this. LOL Seriously beautiful images. You are an exquisite writer, Audrey.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Bill! I appreciate your time and comments--as always!

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      ahorseback 2 years ago

      Hopefully a hundred or so more birthdays like this !........:-}

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      TIMETRAVELER2 2 years ago

      I like "like a mosquito net of love"...beautiful!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading this one Ed and timetraveller!

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Love is certainly divine at 59! I had to rhyme LOL as I am not a true poet, such as you are, dear Audrey.

      This poem is phenomenal in every way. I loved it.

      Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Faith Reaper! So far, so good!!

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      MarshaMusselman1 2 years ago

      Sweet ode to your husband and your relationship together. I've lost some of that savour and it was missing already when I was still your age. I'm only four years your senior.

      Happy Birthday!!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Marsha!!

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      Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

      He must do much right....happy birthday.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Beautiful Audrey, I hope you had a Happy Birthday! Jamie

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      mckbirdbks 2 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Happy Birthday!

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Oh, how lovely and very original! Happy Birthday!

      Love from the sky~

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      peachy 2 years ago from Home Sweet Home

      happy birthday, i like it when you mentioned you take your time to cook dinner

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Happy birthday and a very original idea for a poem. Keep it up. Stay blessed always. Voted up and sharing.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 2 years ago from New Delhi, India

      How sweet!

      Lovely poem and I loved those last lines. Happy Birthday and many happy returns of the day.

      Voted up and shared on HP!

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Audrey you are a modern day amazing poet..bless you

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Audrey you are a modern day amazing poet..bless you

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      Randi Benlulu 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Wow! Great poem! You have an amazing way with words!

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      ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

      chill bumps--another to add to my favorites list

      Happy New Year!

      Kim

      V+~

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      So appropriate for the age 59..." a denouement of love that stops short. . ." I got so caught up, I applauded at the end. Really beautiful!

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      Anna Haven 2 years ago from Scotland

      Happy birthday. Nicely done.

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      Linda Bilyeu 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Happy Birthday! I'm thinking you had a memorable celebration! :)

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Some men enjoy cooking, but fall out of the habit .

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Audrey,

      What can I say? Justice to this poem here is written inside; it is simply this ..... Silence.

      Yet I would say astounding, excellently crafted; carrying the portals of many lanterns while reaching the pinnacle of beauty supreme!

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      Linda Crampton 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Your poem contains some very interesting imagery, Audrey! I love the fact that your poems are so unique. You have a wonderful way of looking at the world.

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      Very impressive. I love the imagery. Hope your birthday was every bit as um, pleasing as the poem suggests it was. ;-)

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      Alison Monroe 2 years ago

      Thanks for writing this.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you for reading it alison!

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      Nicu 2 years ago from Oradea, Romania

      Your poem it's beautiful, I'm happy to read it.

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      Audrey

      Your unique style creates images that will long be remembered.

      You had me at 'I wanted to drink in your potency...' O yes, I have felt that way...

      What a lovely gift from hubby and happy birthday, belatedly Angels are on the way to you today ps

      Voted up and shared

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      Judy Specht 2 years ago from California

      Splendid poem. We are dead before we are too old for love. Cheers!

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      ahorseback 2 years ago

      I wonder , is it that some hearts can fall in love day after day after day !

      Happy birthday , you earned that !

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      Deborah Neyens 2 years ago from Iowa

      Love it! It really captures the essence of a true love that has matured. Well done.

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      Korneliya Yonkova 2 years ago from Cork, Ireland

      Stunning poem again, Audrey! There is no age for the true sweet love. It is eternal. :)

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      Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

      A wonderful birthday present! Beautiful lovely poem!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Vellur! Thank you Cornelia!! Hi Deborah!! Thank you!!

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      How blessed we are that loves sweet rhapsody has no expiration date :D

      Angels are on the way to you today ps

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      Do you mind if I call this poem "adorable"? It was the word that came to mind as I read on...a great experience whether date or hubbie.

      Voted up, funny, and awesome.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you tillsontitan! My husband is truly adorable!!!!

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Audrey,

      It seems he must also be lovable.

      We say that "no couple is far apart, if they are holding hands."

      Do you pray and worship together, too? That always adds to the cohesiveness, and willingness to sacrifice for the mate.

      100% + 100% always has to equal 200% even at times when for any reason half the couple can only manage a 75% share for the time being.

      Another saying we value is "Nobody every lost their shirt when their sleeves were rolled up!" Doing whatever it takes to keep a 200% marriage is one key to success.

      I suspect you are both managing one together.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Thank you Perspycacious! My husband is a church organist and choir director--I often sing as he plays- As we are getting ready for the Easter season, I suspect that some Handel will make its way into one of the services---I am working on "I know that My Redeemer Liveth" and "If Good is For Us" from the Messiah right now for him--I am perhaps more of a heathen than he is--in fact, I know I am--but it is a joy to make music with him---

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      Thelma Alberts 2 years ago from Germany

      WOW! "Love is in the air." Great poem. Thanks for educating me some words that I have never heard before like " cacophonous" and "denouement". I had to google them. Well done!

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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      Thank you Mike!

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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      Thank you Jamie!

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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      Thank you peachpurple!

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      Demas W Jasper 19 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Nice to come back to your comment after doing my latest. Thanks for the glimpse.

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      Audrey Howitt 19 months ago from California

      Hi Perspycacious! Thank you for reading this one! I am terrible about getting to comments and am trying to get better at it! Hope you are well!!

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      Audrey Howitt 17 months ago from California

      Thank you Frank!

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      Audrey Howitt 16 months ago from California

      Sometimes we are just lucky--what a wonderful way of putting it pstraubie48!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you Linda!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      It is always um a pleasure Flourish! Thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you Ed!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you manatita!

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      Audrey Howitt 15 months ago from California

      Thank you MsDora!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you Patricia!!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you timelesstraveler!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Thank you btrbell!

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      Audrey Howitt 14 months ago from California

      Hi Kim! Thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you Chitrangada!

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      Audrey Howitt 13 months ago from California

      Thank you AliciaC!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Frank! I appreciate your kind words!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you drbj! Miss you!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Cornelia!

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      Audrey Howitt 10 months ago from California

      Thank you Mary!! Actually, it is my husband who is so adorable!

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      Patricia Scott 10 months ago from sunny Florida

      A symphony of love....what joy this must bring you both. Angels are on the way

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Patricia!!!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Cris SP!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Thelma!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Anna Haven!

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      Audrey Howitt 8 months ago from California

      Thank you Deborah!

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      Audrey Howitt 7 months ago from California

      Thank you Romanian

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