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Love Let Me Linger (poem)

Updated on August 10, 2013

Sweet love let me linger awhile

And lose myself there in your smile

With visions of dreams to compile

Adrift in a fountain you style


The moon lights the way to romance

Each heartbeat falls deeper in trance

Each breath draws us closer to chance

As wonder wakes waves to enhance


I bid time stay distant awhile

Till I find some meaning to trance

A memory precious per chance

A moment a scent of our style


And here on the sways of romance

What mist dares to tamper with smile

What mischief can blindness compile

To stifle what love will enhance


Forget today’s fashions and style

Distractions which life may compile

This moment was made for a smile

Sweet love let me linger awhile


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      lovedoctor926 3 years ago

      Beautifully written.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Ah, yes, sweet lingering ... lovely.

      Up and more and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Simply beautiful... I particularly loved the very first line "Sweet love let me linger awhile" Barry White was the cherry on top. :)

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      i love how you play with the rhyme..

      i don't know how you do it, but it works beautifully..

      lovely sentiment too, M..

      happy sunday...linger a while..


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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      I love the message here. Forget the 'things' and status quo. All that's needed is a smile.....

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I must have missed the limerick, but this did not disappoint. As Leslie said, the rhyme was exquisite and enjoyable...well done, Martin.

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago


      Good Lord!!

      'Sweet love', and Barry White.

      Someone give me a cigarette.....and I don't even smoke.

      Martin, you are diving us crazy!!


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      dreamseeker2 3 years ago

      Awesome and beautifully written, romantic piece. You will undoubably get plenty of feedback on this one! ; ) Voted it up, of course!!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      this is very well done my friend :)

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      Linda Crampton 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Your love poetry always contains beautiful images, Martin. Thank you!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely! And we do smile a lot when we're in love.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Romantically wonderful.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing poetry.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Truly a wonderful thought on a wonderful day.

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