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Lover Forever (tanka)

Updated on July 4, 2013

Lover forever

Wandering through paradise

Scented by a dream

Far more real than tomorrow

Can ever bring out to bear


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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      To write as you do, one must have as equally large a heart as they do a mind... thank you for sharing the contents of both.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sometimes dreams can be amazingly real. Nice work, Martin.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      I enjoyed it.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely. Enjoyed this.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, beautifully done, sometimes the dreams are far more real than tomorrow. This is beautiful, but it evokes some sadness to.

      My very best to you.

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      Five lines can do so much magic!

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      Kathryn 4 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

      That is very pretty. "scented by a dream" is an interesting line.

      Have a great weekend, Martin.

      ~ Kathryn

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Written with beautiful word of love !

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Those who have found forever love should hold on for dear life. Some of us have never found it.

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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      "Scented by a dream." I'm sure I understand that, but might never have expressed it. I admire your poetic skill.

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      W1totalk 4 years ago

      I have never had a forever love but I am sure that is what it must seem like. A good person, lover, friend, confidante, is a great thing to always have with you.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      I have a forever love...who is not in my life now but remains forever in my heart. Someone who remains now as a friend who is always in contact with me down through the ages.

      These words so beautifully express that love, Dear Martin.

      You are a gift to us.Angels are on the way ps

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      You are truly an expert at these tanka poetry dear Mh. You say so much and with much impact felt deeply with so few words (of course that is a tanka---few words). Very lovely as to love.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless you. In His Love Always, Faith Reaper