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Lovers garden

Updated on September 12, 2009

Garden

Tells tale and birds of dawn sing

In a heavenly garden I take you,

my Queen.

I slowly,gently,touch your glistening

silken skin, glowing brighter

than the cool

marbled moon has ever been.

I sense a craving, a yearning,

that heaven itself

can't mend.

That's Ok, we are about to begin.

Weep,wail,and moan

rest quietly assured

my love is not a loan.

Consumed in your fire,

Unbridled sexual desire,

We can pick cherries

from the sacred tree

and bind our consciousness with unyielding intensity.

I strongly embrace and remove your delicate lace

and look to the heavens in the eyes of an angelic face.

You become hotter,spin,spin, and plead,

but in this place I will show you no mercy.

Heaven opens the door

I slide deeper,nearer, closer to your sacred spot.

Legions of angels scream moi amore.

Warm, wet, and yearning,

flesh to flesh burning.

We strongly grasp hand in hand

for tonight I will show you 22 positions

in a one night stand.

I will prove to to my Queen that I am a man.

I gently penetrate your flower.

Leaving behind all that is sacred for now,

casting cares to nowhere, gliding and sliding

for and hour.

All hail from this dark tower.

Fully in your velvet garden I begin

to press and spring forth like an erect stallion,

Full-thrusted and strong, to subdue your ruby red medallion

and after timeless hours of sweet serene sweat and toil

I bed my seed deep in in the sacred grounds of your moist soil.....

 

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    kim cook 

    9 years ago

    oops,,,,sorry I meant talented....i'm tired....

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    kim cook 

    9 years ago

    You have got to know that you are incredibly talanted...you have a gift...a person reads your poems and are in the moment....not too many people can do that. I loved it.

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    EYES CHAMbERS 

    9 years ago

    I enjoyed this poem. It's def. a painted picture :)

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    Michael Achilles 

    9 years ago

    Thanks Bobbie

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    Bobbie Sandlin 

    9 years ago from Midwest

    After reading this...I shall be your fan! lol GREAT WRITING!!!

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    \Brenda Scully 

    9 years ago

    know what i really think he has.... i forgot about how this site wrecks my head, as i don't know who i am talking to half the bloody time

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

    9 years ago

    Yes...That answers it!... Maybe Michael with take a swim in the Deep & Blue...or maybe he has already. ha ha

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

    9 years ago

    Yes.. that answers it.. Do you think Michael would like a swim in the Depp & Blue??

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    \Brenda Scully 

    9 years ago

    can you believe it no........ not in the ocean or the swimming pool at any rate...... soon though, need 400 euro to join the stupid thing here, can't just go to a pool like you can in any civilised country.... but when i pay it maybe next week every day i will swim.....

    Does that answer your question ha ha

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

    9 years ago

    I prefer swimming in my ocean! =) ~ Have you been swimming lately, Brenda?? lol

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    \Brenda Scully 

    9 years ago

    still did you try taking a shower

  • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

    9 years ago

    Hot and steamy, for sure! =)

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    \Brenda Scully 

    9 years ago

    well hello stallion... and how are you now

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    Am I dead, yet? 

    9 years ago

    =o hawt!

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    tania agosta 

    9 years ago

    ... sublime.

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    Beth100 

    9 years ago from Canada

    Very sensual!

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    Michael Achilles 

    9 years ago

    You Bet it did Madam!

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    Roth Sok 

    9 years ago

    Mister Achilles, your poetry is as tender as my tendons.....

    Very beautiful poetry. This poem made me very hot under the collar. I started to loosen up the buttons on my blouse also. The inspiration for this piece must have left quite an impression on you.

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