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Love's Lost Come Back Around

Updated on February 9, 2012
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Love's lost

Come back around

It's 4:30 and I can't break


Wanting a new life

Feeling stuck here

Doesn't fit me well anymore

Wishing for something else

Waiting for an answer

Looking in the mirror

Messy long tousled hair

Don't want to see my face


Where's a new place

To find a real love

Sunny days that

Come and go

The rain isn't coming

For awhile

Days are getting longer

How I wish things were different

Take me from this dark cloud

I hate feeling lost

Being stuck here

Almost dreamy nothingness

Surrounds me all the time

Serenity has come and gone


Friends who thought were friends

Trying to tear you down

Where do things go from here

I want to disappear

Trying to find strength

Wanting more

In the end

Fighting hard

Dying at the core


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Raciniwa great comment. I do believe in karma. Thank you for stopping by.

      @ Senoritaa thank you I am glad you can relate. I always appreciate your comments. :)

      @ Stessily thank you for your great critique my friend.

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      stessily 6 years ago

      caroline, You've captured the downer of those unsatisfactory, gloomy days of "Wanting a new life Feeling stuck here", those days where you really wish that there would be a good downpour but instead "The rain isn't coming For awhile."

      Very effective.

      Kind regards, Stessily

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      Senoritaa 6 years ago

      Brilliant again Caroline. You say a lot to relate to.

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      what goes around comes around...well, just like karma; you do good, you get do bad then you'll get's just sad that one's so called friends are the people who would let one down...a great observation here Caroline...

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you Always. I am glad you enjoyed it. Love your new photo by the way. Very cute!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I have a feeling that this is just a fictional write and i love it, althought i think most women can relate..Voted up and beautiful...

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Last heart thank you for reading and your comment. Great advice.

      @ SubRon thank you glad you liked it!

      @ Gypsy thanks for the advice and comment. Your comments are always so sweet.

      @ Ghaelach thank you for the encouraging words. I am good, just expressing myself in all ways. lol.

      @ The Frog Prince- lol I love that name! I believe that too. Thank you so much for the comments.

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      The Frog Prince 6 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Caroline - I believe that you will get the love that you give. Maybe more, but seldom less.

      Excellent work.

      The Frog Prince

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Hi Caroline.

      A moving poem.

      I hope these are the words from your magical pen and not the words from your heart.

      Take care Caroline.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Caroline life is never as bad as it seems sometimes. I voted this up and beautiful even if it is a bit sad. Think of how beautiful you are in and out, how talented and how smart. You have so much to offer the world. Look toward the Lord He will give you a helping hand and lead you onward. Look in the mirror and say I'm good, I'm great and I'm getting better ever day and then give yourself the brightest smile. It works. If you want my husband's version - he says look in the mirror and make the worst faces possible at yourself and soon you'll feel the stress melt away and you'll be laughing at yourself and wiping tears. Your choice.

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      You said a lot in your moving poetry, Caroline, and Lana Del Raye said a lot in her video. Deborah Brooks, and others, said a lot in the comments too. Good job!

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      Maria Magdalena Ruiz O'Farrill 6 years ago from Borikén the great land of the valiant and noble Lord

      Here is where I look up to God and feel His hug!! Blesses Caroline, nice poem.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Hi Sky thank you for your inspiring words. That video was great. Love the words about getting out of mental slavery and that we are the only ones to free our mind. Thank you my friend.

      @ Michael thank you for that sweet poem. That definitely made me smile. :) LOL.

      @ Reiki thank you for taking time out and reading and commenting. Also for the kind wishes.

      @ Sueswan Thank you! Always good to see you!

      @ Debbie thank you for such a sweet comment. It really made me feel a lot better. Always wonderful to read your comments. :)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Caroline,, You have wrote a beautiful poem. I pray you are not so blue..You are one of the sweetest Hubbers around..I want to serve you a glass of sweetness this evening, to make you feel not so blue and loved. Love is the greatest refreshment in life..Praying for you

      voted way up for your beautiful poem.


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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Caroline,

      I wish you a quick exit from that dark cloud.

      Voted up and away!

      Take Care

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      reikieffect 6 years ago

      Dear Caroline, I hope you are doing ok and may this poem be just a sad moment that you captured well. Beautiful!

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado


      I know that sometimes you get the blues

      So I thought,I would write this poem for you

      Hello, Gorgeous, you look great today

      If I could see you every morning

      this is what I would say

      You shine just like the sun

      you glow brighter than the moon

      just a look from you

      would make any man swoon.

      Let me see that smile!

      Much Love


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I loft up my eyes onto the hills from whence cometh my strength.

      That's always a great thing to do Caroline . Let is out , never keep a weight weighing you down , away with it , and the best , way is by writing it . In doing so you have it picked out and identified , ready to be destroyed . Close the door on any negative.

      Great poem of freedom and emancipation.

      Be well bless.