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Loves Surrender

Updated on February 21, 2013
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Emotionally Capsized...

Love stalked me like a long, awaited, curious admirer

I smiled, tenderly awaiting the impact

but love took it's time caressing my emotions

awakening every vessel in my body, trembling from thought

desire, purged with the essence of a wandering heart

I closed my eyes and tried to imagine how the journey would begin

and the warmth of my silhouette exploded from within

I trembled at the very thought of this new found freedom

tackling my emotions as a stream breaking through the core of life

until the silent scream inside me erupted

and there was nothing left of me, but surrender

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    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

      this just oozes talent and a passion we should all surrender too.

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      Karen Russell 4 years ago

      Thank you Nikkij504gurl for dropping by, and thank you for your comment...

    • Scarface1300 profile image

      Scarface1300 4 years ago

      This piece flows with emotion and is exceptionally well wrote. It rolls along with truthfull expression and I loved it. Voted up and beautiful...

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      just beautiful-captures the passion-thank you-Kim

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      Kenneth C Agudo 3 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      passionately written with heart. Good job :)

    • Karen Russell profile image
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      Karen Russell 3 years ago

      Asante Sana/thank you very much!

    • Karen Russell profile image
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      Karen Russell 3 years ago

      Asante Sana/thank you very much!

    • Karen Russell profile image
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      Karen Russell 3 years ago

      Asante Sana/thank you very much!

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