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Love's rules [Poem]

Updated on August 4, 2013

Love makes me good and bad in the same breath

Love makes me different, but maybe, for the first time, I am myself

Love doesn't know means, ain't got means

Love is a chance that comes by chance

Love is when you look into your partner's eyes and you aren't lost anymore

Which 'rule' do you prefer?

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      leann2800 5 years ago

      I love the last line about love. :)Up and beautiful

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      WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

      Oh to be young again. Great love song, brother.

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      Donna Sundblad 5 years ago from Georgia

      I love the last line, too. It's my favorite!

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      loaqucious laura 5 years ago

      Nice job capturing the inner self and the challenges and fullness of love.

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      Ram Bansal 5 years ago from India

      yes, love comes per chance only..

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Short but very sweet

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love is...great poem...so many thing to learn about love...

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      mathira 5 years ago

      Love makes our meaningful and your poem about it was touching.

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      Lorenzo27 5 years ago from Pistoia, Italy

      I'm glad that you like it. Thanks for your comments!

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      time2rite 5 years ago

      Very beautiful; I voted "up"! I love the "chance that comes by chance" part.

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      katyzzz 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Beautiful, well done

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      rjsadowski 5 years ago

      Finding true love is like finding the piece that completes the puzzle.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Very sweet

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      Twila Nelson 5 years ago from Carmichael, California

      Very nice poem, sounds like true love. Thank you !

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      David Stillwell 5 years ago from Sacramento, California

      Ti Amo

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      d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

      Good poem. Few words with lots of meaning.

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      Bella Nina 5 years ago from USA

      Awww ~ so sweet. I loved it Lorenzo!

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      shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Hello Lorenzo! A very small but beautiful Love poem. I loved reading it and I liked the last line of your Poem. Very true and Thanks for sharing with us.:)

      voted up, awesome, interesting.

      with Respect

      from SHANAYA:)

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      DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      This poem says a lot in so few words.

      ...voted up—DF

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      Lorenzo27 4 years ago from Pistoia, Italy

      Thanks everybody for stopping by and for your kind comments!

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