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Loving You

Updated on March 16, 2011

Loving You

Loving you has taught me so much

It is you who gave meaning to my life

How to face the world with you on my side

And understand why day comes after night

You also showed me the real me

And Introduced things which I can not see

You gave me confidence and said feel free

That I learned things which I know I should'nt be

It is you who taught me love

That inspire me in everything I do

That leads me anywhere I go

That almost thought you're an angel sent from above

Above all you are the one whom I bear hatred

Months after I named you "Mr. heartless"

'Cause you never cared "bout my love for you

Then I realize that loving you is just but pain to bear.

LOVING YOU

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      shegarlynn 6 years ago from United States

      Thanks Freya, Love is always good from the beginning but sometime it end good or bad. We cannot do anything just to accept it.

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Nice start, bad ending. Bad love always leave unpleasant feeling. But unless, we learn something, right?

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      shegarlynn 7 years ago from United States

      Hi Henry! Thanks fro dropping by..

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      henry 7 years ago

      nice poem!!!

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      henry 7 years ago

      nice poem!!!

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      shegarlynn 7 years ago from United States

      Hi Harry, NSY, and emma, thank's for dropping by and commenting this hub.... hope you will come again...

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      emma 7 years ago

      Nice article, I like it.

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      nsy 7 years ago

      nindot ang gihimo nimo.... i like it........

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      harry 8 years ago

      Nice hub, ang guapo naman ni Gary

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      shegarlynn 8 years ago from United States

      Hi Reah, thanks for dropping by.

      dalawa na tayo....

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      reah 8 years ago

      Hi Idol, Ang Guapo mo talaga...

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      shegarlynn 8 years ago from United States

      Thanks Sophieqd, 

      You are most welcome, and enjoy.

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      sophieqd 8 years ago

      Loving You This is the poem that I choose from my Niece

      I enjoyed reading your hub. It was very informative. I will come back to read more of your other hubs.

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      sophieqd 8 years ago

      Loving You This is the poem that I choose from my Niece

      Thanks for sharing all this information.

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      shegarlynn 8 years ago from United States

      Thank's for all of your comments, and your visit aswell...

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      pat 8 years ago

      very nice.

      khalid says its cool.

      abdullah agrees.

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      Lgali 8 years ago

      nicely said

      That inspire me in everything I do

      That leads me anywhere I go