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Magic love - Crazy love (a poem)

Updated on January 28, 2012

Crazy love - caught under its spell

Love weaves its magic over all, no one is spared from the spell it casts. It spreads its net far and wide and there is no escaping it. Love seems to be the magic lever of all. Unlike death, love is the lever of classes and people. The things that people in love do seem irrational and almost like one under a spell. Poor you if you are caught up in the crazy spin of love and miserable you if you have not tasted of its delights. The light in the starry eyes of a lover pales the rainbow into insignificance, the forest fire are but a torch to the passion and ardor of a person in love. Enter this world of magical love and tender thoughts...


Magic love - crazy love

Shall we lock our hearts in love,

And throw away the key?

Shall we bind ourselves together,

With silken threads of joy, so free?

Shall we delight in each other,

Basking under the glorious sun?

Shall we spend our lifetime together,

In pure merriment and fun?

Shall we wrap ourselves in the other,

And lose our identity?

Shall we love until we feel,

Satiated and replete?

Shall we delve deep into each others hearts,

Being forever united and never apart?

Together shall we weave our earthly dreams,

Of life on rainbows and sunbeams?

Shall we set the earth aglow,

With our hearty trails of love?

Shall we teach the heavens above,

The magic of our love?

Shall we whisper sweet nothings,

Until Dawn awakens the earthlings?

Shall we play at tenderness,

Soaring the heights of sweetness?

Shall we smell the heady scent,

Of love’s timely advent?

Shall we melt and fuse as one,

As we exult in our joyous haven!

Do you feel it ..........................

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Love is indeed magical.. It makes us feel so much.

      Beautiful write :)

      definitely Sharing it...

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Thank you voodospell, I am glad that you enjoyed it!! Shalom!!

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      voodoospell 6 years ago from 1958 South 950 East Provo

      Nice hub i really enjoyed when i read.

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Jennuhlee, that is so sweet of you..thank you so much :) Love is a strong feeling and passion is the intensity that you feel from the blaze of love.. I appreciate this :)

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      Jennuhlee 6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      wow soooo beautiful, each line full of so much grace, so much passion. Great poem, thank you so much for sharing:]

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Haikutwinkle.. thank you.. I have the sensitivity that is refelcted in your poetry.. so it is easy for your to see that in mine.. I always look forward to your visits and comments.. thank you so much.. Much appreciated. :)

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      haikutwinkle 6 years ago

      such gentleness and tenderness in between the lines... your poems are often appreciated!

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Ruby, it is always a delight to see you here, in my little haven...It is lovely to hear that you feel the love, my dear. Thank you for your kind words :)

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Hi Rosemay, welcome to my peaceful little world, I am so glad that we are so much in agreement.. love is a wonderful thing..and yes, who cares if it is crazy :) Great to hear how you feel and thank you!!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is very beautiful. I could feel the love. Thank you.


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      Rosemary Sadler 6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      So gentle and yet so passionate I love your poem.

      Love is wonderful and magic and sometimes crazy, but who cares when you are in love.

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Oh LOL ... love never ends.. this love is two decades old... Wish you much love and happiness.. thank you C M Sullivan for your practical observation.. :)

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      CM Sullivan 6 years ago from California

      Very pretty, love usually starts out magical...and ends crazy. Vote up and beautiful.

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Saddlerider, such lovely words. I am glad that you think so. How true, there is love everywhere all we need is the readiness to receive it. Thank you for such words of encouragement, I shall truly treasure them :)

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Simply beautiful, I felt the Love. The tenderness, sweetness and sparkling tingling essence and scent of Love between two people. It gives me hope, Love is in the air, one just has to be ready to receive it when it crosses ones path or knocks on ones door. I rate this Up and awesome. Bravo, I applaud you.