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Magnetic Forces

Updated on October 16, 2009


Magnetic Forces! © -MFB III




We dashed in

ponchos flapping

wet stacattos
to the less then

adequate shelter

of a snack bar
huddling close

we both laughed

over the quick downpour
that had caught us

 in mid stroll

within the park.

I pulled her close

to warm her and

then her blue eyes,
dewed by raindrops

met mine, and

overwhelmed me
with the strongest urge

to wet her lips as well.

We kissed deeply

beneath the shadows

of that tin roof,
my lips on hers

blending 2 day beard

and ruby silk
then lightning struck,

and burned love

in our souls.


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    • Randy Behavior profile image

      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      So yummy, it warmed me to my toes :)

    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      I couldn't wait it to rain here then I could relight the passion I felt when I read your hub.I have to go. The sky got all dark and I hear the rain coming.

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