ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing

Me, My Guitar and You - A Poem

Updated on May 1, 2013

Get ready for our beat..!

Source

From the beat of a Heart...

.

.

Awesomely starting to feel the beat

comparing my guitar to a dream of you

those chords that follow me all over the room

jumping to a certain kind of need

Taking you on center stage with me


.

.


My heartbeat is closing in on your encircled desires

lights going on and off, setting my whole body on fire

you try to keep your own beat, dancing around me

Shoulder to shoulder moaning as your heart skip that beat

.

Now we are getting there with my guitar as a partner in crime

drums and secret beats trying to make you fall

yeah Baby you just can't help it anymore

dosing delightfully this desire created for you


.

.

Music was my greatest ally in.. at least getting by

getting my life closer to a perfect love connection in disguise

Can you feel your body and mind getting you there?

where our lives will be in 'happy mode' away from despair?

.

.

Gonna just reveal part of my secret to you

I have romance, care, mind that can see you through

Want to make you feel needed and understood

my music plays an important role, this way you feel good...!

.

.

But after all, we just give in to those moments of a lifetime

being here ourselves feeling life through our veins

You start to scream and hardly catching up with your breath

A strenuous wow! and a shriveling sensation that won't cease

.

.

oh baby! Are you losing momentum to my beat?

tyring to hug me from behind, 'kissing my neck in a click'

intoxicated without a back up for this 'kind of joy'

you are already in my arms exclaiming that it was my fault


.

.

Marching bands that cross our minds

joining this guitar that trembles down to the ground...!

giving me reasons to set my mind on sensual grilling

that will get us closer to a consensual agreement


.


You and my guitar connecting the chords of my own life

You and my drums selecting and closing doors to a pain left behind

You and my piano, mixing notes going from dark to bright

Attacking your senses..and about to blow your mind!


.

.

Dancing and looking for the rhythm that will cause deeper feelings

that brilliantly is setting up a splendorous and charming beginning

You already caught up with my own moves, sweet thing!

keeping those lips moisten for the call of a lifetime


.

.

Do you think you need a break for all these sensations?

think about it, sweet thoughts deferring oncoming innuendos

I know, you cannot take this complicated feelings anymore

but keep trying to read until the very end, oh sweet Lord!


.

.


Wonderful to know that women are the gift from up above

knowing how to keep them happy and fulfilled afterwards

You and my guitar made the perfect song

with no premeditated beat, words or even sound...


.

.

Dancing all night until our bodies ask for a truce

the kind that ends all logical explanations

and make us feel in complete contentment and amused

My guitar, my life and you solving all the equations of love

that only God knows where it will takes after all...

Comments

Submit a Comment

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    LaThing!! you are funny! Lol! Thought you were fine reading this kind of poetry. We appreciate.. and expect a visit from ya! Take care La!

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Julie hi!~

    Catching up with our commenting back. This is our style of poetry and we think we found a way to transmit real emotions through the word. The music helps to complement that delivery. Thanks for commenting on this inspiration.

  • LaThing profile image

    LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

    Sorry, got lost in those words.... Had to bring myself back to reality, lol! Obviously, enjoyed it ;)

    Voting up and awesome.....

  • Julie DeNeen profile image

    Blurter of Indiscretions 5 years ago from Clinton CT

    Love, music, dance = romance. Oh yes, and poetry too! :) Nice job!

  • PDXKaraokeGuy profile image

    Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

    Thanks Lord. I appreciate that! I always enjoy stopping by!

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    I hear you Raci!

    That's why they invented the globes,LOL!

    At least we can fun hearing a Heavy metal concert!! I wanna rock!!

    LORD

  • raciniwa profile image

    raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

    Merry Christmas too Lord and a bountiful New Year...

    yeah, i've tried that but i can't get over with the pain though...

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Raciniwa,

    Well, We can play it listening to this video. You will have to get used to the initial pain in your fingers and pay attention to the notes. The resy will follow slowly. We love music by the bunches! Thanks Raciniwa!

    Merry Christmas!!

    LORD

  • raciniwa profile image

    raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

    it seems that you want to play the whole orchestra for this poem lord...it leaves so much to the impression...great metaphor...i like to play the guitar but i don't know how...

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hello again Gypsy Rose Lee,

    We love music a whole lot! our lives are filled from memories and this hub.. this Poem represent so much from us...Of course we can get down to it! with love and passion! Take care dear friend!

    LORD

  • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

    Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

    Super hub. Dancing can be looked upon as the rhythm of love because with the right music it can feel so good.

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    There you go GOEGO! Hopefully you enjoyed thoroughly our inspiration...Take care and goodnight!

    LORD

  • goego profile image

    goego 5 years ago from Loserland

    very nice

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Kelly!

    Harp Lover..and feeling undiscovered? Not that we wear glasses like Napoleon Dinamite...not at all, we are like any John Doe...but our fingers and mind pen the words down...that you are reading this second. Sydney is a cute commenter by the way!

    LORD

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Mary615,

    It's been 18 years since we don't play, but we can re take where we left. As We told Miss Olive, once, We can sing..believe it or not...

    Lord

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Pickles and rufus, Here is the formula:

    D+M+C+HEART = 99.99%(FxUxN)

    D=DANCE

    M=MUSIC

    C=CHEMISTRY

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hello debbie Brooks,

    You are going to look for your man? How nice!..but don't blame on us for any...you know? Thanks for your Love! We felt some coming our way dear!

    LORD

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Linda,

    might as well go out and get intoxicated..not with a beer..I meant to say a Double Cheeseburger and keep hubbing. Yeah! Music is a good medicine for us, actually is in us and keep us going. And thank you for the mention guys...as Hub-hopper of the day...

    LORD

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Bobbi, glad to see you in here dear friend! Seems that your duplicate content hub was set to green. You said it clear..things and words in our hubs come from complex experiences that we saw ,lived, read, hear of..during our years of life. You have a nice one dear friend.

    LORD

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    PDXKaraokeguy,

    You are welcome my friend! You deserve and award for best pal on the hubs.... I can read between the lines your spirit. Uncle should be proud of you! Thanks Buddy!

    LORD

  • RealHousewife profile image

    Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

    Lord - ha! And all this time I thought you were a "harp" lover:) lol. Up and all that!

  • mary615 profile image

    Mary Hyatt 5 years ago from Florida

    Now, Lord, I just have to ask: Do you really play the guitar??? This was very sweet, by the way. Goodnight.

  • picklesandrufus profile image

    picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

    dance, music and chemistry-the best....Vote up!

  • Deborah Brooks profile image

    Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    OH MY...I am ready to go find my man.. LOL.. I love this.. I love dancing I love music.. and of course like everyone I love love.. LOL... YOU got my vote. UP AND AWESOME...

  • PDXKaraokeGuy profile image

    Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

    good work. nice analogy

  • Sunshine625 profile image

    Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Music soothes the soul...it's a cure for all that ails you. Amen for this hub Lord!

  • PurvisBobbi44 profile image

    PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

    Lord,

    Congrads, because you are the best. The zenith of music and words---of feelings and expressions. The King of poems--which warms and caresses the heart of all who reads them, and leaves one wondering can this really be true---did this really happen? Yes, it can--I believe it.

    Your Hub Friend,

    Bobbi

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi there Eiddwen! Glad you enjoyed this piece too// take care

    LORD

  • Eiddwen profile image

    Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

    A great hub and thanks for sharing.

    Take care,

    Eddy.

  • Lord De Cross profile image
    Author

    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi there hubber friend Sholland10,

    We are happy to have you here...not a male side response yet! But, certainly it can appeal to a woman's feelings from the beginning. This is part of us...living around music and enjoying every second of it. Thanks for your comment...much appreciated!

    LORD

  • sholland10 profile image

    Susan Holland 5 years ago from Southwest Missouri

    Unless I am completely off, love and music are a great match and should never be separated. If I am incorrect, I loved the ideas and images it brought to heart and mind for me. :-)

    Voted up, awesome and beautiful!