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Methinks You Are Trying To Kill Me.

Updated on May 25, 2013

You're Killing me slowly,

As I knew you would.

Nothing about you has

any force for good.

Killing me slowly..


Some were fooled by your outward show,

I knew all along. I know what you know.

And of course you can kill , you do each day,

Killing me slowly.


People don't see a broken heart.

When it's you inside, tearing apart,

Why Should they believe, what they cannot see?

Only you and I know you're killing me..


You're killing me slowly,

As I thought you would.

No antidote will make me feel good,

You are evil , enjoying each moment of..

killing me slowly.


My heart's being sliced when it's not being torn,

By memories of a beautiful morn.

Like this one today, and others to come,

While you plot and scheme to hold back the sun.

Killing me slowly.


Not easy to live with a broken heart,

It's needed to pump, not be torn apart,

But just as I thought, You feel nought of that.

The pumping could stop and you'd just sit back,

Knowing achievement. The Killing of Me.

Slowly.


It was you all along, doing the killing,

Carefully, slowly, corrupting the willing

Those willing to fall for your devious tricks.

Killing me slowly.


A strong beating heart could stand up to you,

The killing me slowly may not come true,

You don't like a fight. You devour the weak.

And I have been weak, but will I stay thus?


You do your worst. Time will soon tell,

Whether you killed me slowly,

Or you went to Hell.


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    Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

    OOH! How deep is that sentence?

    So glad to see you again on my page.

    Thank you for taking the time.

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    W1totalk 3 years ago

    I feel like I am in the process of waiting for death in love. Good poem.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks for visiting micky. Always great to see you and your bike.

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    Micky Dee 3 years ago

    Very well done Dim. Nice!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    What a joy to see yoj here and leaving me such a beautiful comment. Can t thank enough for your beautiful words.

    God bless and thank you

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    Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

    This reminds me of a great quote "What nourishes me, destroys me..."

    You wrote this so effective and beautiful. You know you are one of my favorites here. :) *hugs*

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks Alastar. Love your comment.

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    Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

    Certainly a poem that's the antithesis of "Killing Me Softly With His Song." A strong beating heart was the perfect antidote to this psycho devil, Dim.:)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi Dream On.

    Thanks for such a lovely comment.

    Take care.

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    dream on 4 years ago

    Your description of pain is quite vivid and sharp.Life can turn out to be great if the one killing you takes one good heart attack.So happy to be reading your hubs.Another hub so many can relate to.Always a pleasure connecting with a friend who is sweet from head to toe.See you around and don"t forget to keep dreaming when you take a walk down town.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello ocfireflies.

    It makes me very happy to know that l may have helped in some small way.

    So many of us suffer in silence, when we ought to be yelling from the rooftops.

    I think most of us are tougher than we think but our confidence has been eroded.

    Pleased to meet you on hubpages and thank for taking the time to comment.

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    ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

    This poem touched me on such a deep level. I have been dealing with a situation in which I have felt as if I had no control. The ending of your poem gives me hope...

    Thank You for this poem.

    Voted up and awesome.

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    Cat 4 years ago from New York

    Thank you, most people respond; "Yes, no be quiet!" :D

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you Cantuhearmescream........ What a brilliant name you've chosen.!!!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you Imkarn23.

    Great support from your comment.

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    Cat 4 years ago from New York

    Dim Flaxenwick,

    This is excellent and I felt you were pulling words straight from my heart and head. Speaking from experience, as you mentioned the fooling of others, I thought about how many of us suffer in silence and put on a happy face for the public and watch this heart-stomper, patted on the back for being such a wonderful man... if only they knew, yet who would tell them? What a beautiful write!

    Up, awesome, beautiful and sharing!

    Cat

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    Karen Silverman 4 years ago

    Be strong - you deserve better! It's sooo hard to break free when love, dependency, control and other factors come into play!

    This said it all - and oh, so well!

    voting/sharing

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello Curiad.

    Thanks for a beautiful comment.

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    Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

    Beautifully said. The conflict between our own knowledge and our hearts emotions is always there, pulling one way then the other.

    Mark

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    So glad you liked it. It's a compliment that you shared it,. Thank you.

    I don't know what it means for you to link it./ but if it's like sharing on facebook or google plus..... something like that,,, No problem.

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    Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

    Very profound and intense write here!!! Really great, love it!!!

    Voted up ++++ and sharing

    I would love to link this one.

    Blessings, Faith Reaper

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi Colin. You are naughty sometimes. How could wd fly away without little Miss Tiffy and the others? Just a slight oversight l expect.

    Seriously a fantastic comment for which l thank you. Hope you have had a good sleep after work.

    God bless you dear friend.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you xstatic.

    Very kind of you to leave a lovely comment.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you cleaner3.

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    cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

    beautiful Dim.. great poem ..

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    Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

    Very interesting and poetic way to lead up to a self-saving confrontation that must take place.

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    epigramman 4 years ago

    Yes my U.K. baby 'me is trying to kill you with my undying love so we can glide and soar into the heavens just the two of us forever and ever .....and leave this godforsaken rat race behind and I will worship your red hair for eternity .... and beyond into the next galaxy ....... 'cos where we're going ... no one will ever find us, lol.

    I love your writing here my dear friend Veronica - it certainly made me sit up and take notice - thank you for inspiring me with your words here and confirming exactly what I've always thought and felt - when I arrive here on your hub scene I am in the presence of one very awesome writer/poet.

    Sending to you my warmest sincere wishes from Colin and his cats and just home from night shift at lake erie time 6:23am canada

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