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Dramatic Poetry: Midnight Snack Research

Updated on October 2, 2013
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While in the fridge

looking for a taste

of something fulfilling,
you press against
my bottom and grab


the homemade
chocolate raspberry
mousse
off my top shelf
and pull out


a strange spoon.
You feed me
your sweet
charm and whip
cream lovingly.


Standing up
in the dark, atomic,
run-down kitchen,
we intensely banter
with ambrosial flavors;


Marveling at how the right
combination of quarks and
chemistry can design the
most sensual and euphoric
bite.

Notes:

For those of you that don't know, there are six flavors of quarks: up, down, strange, charm, bottom, and top. I wanted to aim my poem at the more scientifically inclined because my boyfriend is a nerd. Most people that don't know about the science stuff don't notice, but my brother who is a total geek caught it right away. I just want to see what other poets think of it.

Posted for the Poetry Challenge by Phillydreamer

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      Jose Velasquez 5 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      This is kind of steamy. I don't think you will find a more original idea regarding erotic love. I've seen food, and I have seen chemistry, but never seen them together lol.

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      Gareth Pritchard 5 years ago from North Wales

      Ha, ha, yeah, ring my bell its on the other leg, atomic, quarks, um yes but all the other metaphors are far greater in number, with much more to suggest.

      Coolamondo, thanx, Gareth.

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      Christine Buenemann 5 years ago from Saint Louis, Mo

      Thanks so much. I wanted it to be steamy and suggestive to play with the imagination.

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      Gareth Pritchard 5 years ago from North Wales

      From my own imaginings I think you can safely assume it worked. Ha, ha, thanx.

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      Definitely steamy and suggestive! Good job. Voted up.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This definitely stirs the imagination, very well done

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      Christine Buenemann 5 years ago from Saint Louis, Mo

      Thank you everyone. I'm just glad no one on here is confused. I did have a few people my own age that didn't seem to get all the complexities of it. Most just seemed to think it was about "doing it" instead of the intimacy we shared feeding each other. Kids... lol

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      sheilanewton 5 years ago from North Shields, UK

      Oh, I SOOOO love this - it has everything, including FOOD for thought. Mmmm...raspberries! What a clever poet you are. must follow you - I just MUST!

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