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Mind Melding (a poetic tribute to writinglover)

Updated on February 20, 2014

Here is a special tribute to WRITINGLOVER

Because of writinglover's amazing story Mind Games: A Fiction Story and her own poem about the concept 'mind melding', this poem was written. This amazing writer has inspired me with her writing and her feedback. Thank you writinglover for your amazing and inspiring talent!




We breathe

Blending energies
until two heartbeats
they beat, beat, beat
as one

what is mine is yours
what is yours is mine
my thoughts, my dreams,
and my memories
bleed into you
as if your blood,
your soul, your life
beats into me
like our heartbeats
beating as one

I can hear you
I can hear your heartbeat
and I can hear your words
you touch my mind
you know my soul

tangle yourself into me
dance with me
move with me
until we blend
until we meld
until we are one

we are the music: separate instruments
with separate tunes
but as we move together
blending our notes, our ideas,
and our visions
a haunting tune that is known by many
but only played by a few
enchanting, enthralling,
and painfully beautiful

it is ours
it is mine
it is yours
it is us

as we separate
as we unfold
as we untangle ourselves
we still know, we still feel
we still understand
we still sense
one another


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      Cat 4 years ago from New York


      I think it's awesome how wonderful of a community we have here! I have never seen such support anywhere online, like there is here. I'll most certainly be back to read more of your hubs.

      Have a wonderful weekend!


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      MaeMG 4 years ago

      Cantuhearmescream -- Aw thanks! WL was the first person that continued to encourage me to write. With Isaac, I try to help him with looking over his chapters to edit and make suggestions. Both of them are both inspirations to me.

      Mhatter99 -- Thank you for reading and I also thank Cantuhearmescream for sharing.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this wonderful poem. And thank you Cantuhearmescream for calling my attention to it.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York


      Wow, this is absolutely awesome!!! I actually came over here because Isaac White was singing your praises on a hub of his, then I am pleasantly surprised to see your connection and appreciation for my dear friend, writinglover!

      I love writinglover's stories myself and the concept of mind melding is absolutely awesome. You have taken that concept and ran so far with it! I love it, I love how you approached this and I left the earth for a moment!

      Voted up and others ~ Sharing too!


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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Yeah. HP didn't notify me of the publication, otherwise I would have commented much sooner than this. Plus, my computer decided to spazz out on me and had to do a system restore. That's life!

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      MaeMG 4 years ago

      Vkwok -- Thanks! I'm glad you saw that element. There are times I wonder if I showed the emotion and meaning behind the words.

      Writinglover -- Glad YOU liked it! I was getting worried... I thought you didn't like it. I didn't know whether if I should ask if you wanted me to take it down or not. :D

      Romeos Quill -- She is a special young woman. Glad I'm not the only one to notice. :)

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      A wonderful tribute, for a special young woman.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Holy crap!!!!!!! I cannot believe that HP did not notify me of this tribute! I mean I knew you talked about it, but this was beyond expectations! I love it Mae! Thank you! Voted it up and shared!!!

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Very romantic!