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Modern Knights

Updated on July 15, 2015

Her eyes hold deeply

a story of a man tied

her soul in a knot

Interlocking. Modern knights

In a fleet, far dragging feet.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      AudreyHowitt ,

      I am glad you liked it . Best ones,I am keeping them for my first book :)

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Like this a bunch--esp your layout of the text--really works for me

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Missy Smith,

      Oh ,That's interesting.I hope you are doing fine.

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      Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

      This one I think I relate to on some level. Very nice! :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks Theresa so much for the comment.Have a great weekend!

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      ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

      So lovely, poignant and voted way up+++

      Blessings,

      Kim

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Frank,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Yep, as Frank stated above, very profound indeed. This write stirs and moves one's heart.

      Peace and blessings,

      Theresa

      Theresa

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      Lisa VanVorst 2 years ago from New Jersey

      Simple but to the point.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      very profound.. yep