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Dreams: A Poem

Updated on July 6, 2017
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I don't care what you say,

I'll go my own way,

I might get lost in the shadows,

Or in overgrown meadows,

But I won't get stuck on a rat's wheel,

I really don't see the appeal,

Of running around and around with no destination,

Living without any satisfaction,

They say I have to get a job I hate,

"A job you love? We can't relate,

Just work, pay your bills, and die,

There's no other way to try,

To have all your prosperous ducks in a row,

Than to surrender to the status quo,"

But I refuse to follow everyone's cue,

And let the staleness of a boring life ensue.


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      John Hansen 3 weeks ago from Queensland Australia

      What a great poem, Erin. I love the sentiments here of being free to do your own thing and not just what people tell you to...escape that boring life and be free. Great image too.

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      Erin Bower 3 weeks ago from Georgia

      Thanks so much, Jodah! I'm glad you enjoyed this and that I got my message across. Thank you for reading!

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      Nathan Bernardo 3 weeks ago from California, United States of America

      Very well-said, Erin. I very much relate to the sentiment, the simplicity but precision of the verse talks to the heart, and the imagery is vivid and immediately elicits the feeling of not wanting to be trapped by drudgery and the status quo.

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      Erin Bower 3 weeks ago from Georgia

      NateB11: Wow! Thank you for your kinds words.

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      Audrey Hunt 3 weeks ago from Nashville Tn.

      We are each unique with one-of-a-kind traits. Your poem reflects on our inner joy brought about by listening to our heart and not our mind. I love this. To be free from the expectations of others and do our own thing is greatness!

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      Erin Bower 2 weeks ago from Georgia

      Thank you, Audrey Hunt! I'm so glad you understood the message of this poem. I like how you wrote, "Your poem reflects on our inner joy brought about by listening to our heart and not our mind." So true! Thanks for your insightful comment.

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