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More Than Written Words

Updated on September 22, 2011

Sister, when your world is going down
Don’t fall and don’t drown
You are worth of everything
The world cannot buy

You are precious to me dear
And you’ll always have me near
Whether down fall and up hill
I’ll always love you still

Our friendship cannot replace
By all who I cannot named
This friendship will remain
Forever until I left the earth

But even how far I’ll be
Love will never disappear
And one day if I die
I know someday we’ll reunite

You are the one that money can’t buy
And you are the one that has no price
Because you are more valuable that product i can buy

Every written words I express are real
And every unspoken words yet not have spoken
Has written in my heart and wished to show than to be read
Because I believe my action mean more than words I say

And before I end this poem today
I’d like to share you one word
That express my true feeling and that is


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    • chanroth profile image

      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Dinesh, nasser and uban, thank you so much for your comments!! ^_^

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      Love binds and bring joy, happiness, trust and union. You ve touched my heart with those sweet word and promises. Be ever blessed. You re wonderful in your word usage. Great poem. Voted beautiful and awesome

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      nasseralabdali 6 years ago from Saudi Arabia

      Hi Chanroth,

      Your heartfelt poem touches the fact of true love and feelings depicted in sister-sister relationship, and this surely stresses the strong unity of the family members.I love your simple poetic words that everyone old or young can feel and understand. what a touching poem! voted up and beautiful! Great job!Nasser

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      VENZKHVAM 6 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

      Dear Chanroth,

      I use to see daily what my Chanroth has written.Thanks once again for sharing a beautifully , emotionally,convincingly composed feelings for your sister.

      I am sure many sisters will relate your lines with those you had expressed for your sister.

      Your opening of the poem is very strong with lines like "when your world is going down

      Don’t fall and don’t drown"

      I enjoyed the feeling of this of a undying love to your sister.I think she is most luckiest girl in the world to have A LOVELY SISTER LIKE YOU.

      Thanks for sharing with us.

      I had voted this up and AWESOME.

      with warm regards

      Dinesh Nair.