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My Love,You Have A Rival

Updated on August 2, 2014

I sit in the shade

Watching roaring waves pummel

To the shore steadfast

‘My love, you have a rival’

I smiled broadly at the thought.

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      LailaK 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Even though your poem is short and simple, James, but for some reason, it drew a smile on my face :) I like it and voted up!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Laila,

      Thanks for stopping by and commented.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Great last line, ahhhh...good stuff. Jamie

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      Eric Wayne Flynn 2 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island

      Nice thought it is.

      EWF

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      jhamann,

      Thanks for the visit .Have a nice day there!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Eric Flynn,

      Thanks for dropping by and commented.Have a wonderful day there!

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      Kept private 2 years ago from Northeast United States

      Loved the title and concept :). Thank you for sharing :)

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      Melvin Augustine 21 months ago from India

      All smiles :) Good one!

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      Tijani Achamlal 21 months ago from Morocco

      carrie Lee Night,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

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