My Private Hell

I just reread it too..it is one of my favourites, Audrey. I don't think many of the staff know much about poetry.

Oops, I guess my ship has hit the fan and my Hubber score dropped like a rock to 83 I guess HP has no sense of humor.

I second Jodah's motion and Shyron, you kill me with your creative sh*t! Ooops, sorry!

No kidding now, this is brilliant Audrey!

Audrey, Jodah is right, HP does not appreciate poetry the way that we the poetry connoisseurs do.

Just looking up your new word in the dictionary,

It should be there, and you would have to clear the air

If you disturb the shit

You would stir up a stink

And make HP start to think

And on their Bong they'd take a hit

That is what my dictionary calls shit

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Loved it

Blessings and Hugs

I like this poem, too. Shit-disturber is a new word for me. LOL!

I like this poem too Audrey, don't take "quality" thing too literally. They have no idea of quality if it is poetry or creative writing. To HP quality means how many photos, videos, maps, polls and views the hub gets.

Voted up and breathless. "...you could charm an alligator to eat honey out of your palm without breaking skin..." awesome wording...awesome

So, so, loved it. shit disturber, you got me laughing and thinking, enjoyed it!

Hi Audrey, indeed the poem and the painting express the same thing. BTW: if you are in Germany on September 15, just come around to my exhibition, it's called "Nature likes no emptiness". This picture will also be there...

... just saw that you used my painting to illustrate your lines, which I appreciate, of course. Any reason why u picked it up for that poem?

nice work again audrey. one of my faves

Audrey, voted up and awesome! What great detail this is written in. A great job! Cheers.

Good for you Audrey... like in te old westerns sometime we just gotta shoot from the hip... love this...

Hugs from Canada

You sound a lot like me. I never look for trouble but I don't take no ---- from anyone. I did for too many years. So good for you!

I loved the poem but I think the one hiding their true self is closer to getting that space in hell lol..

I love this poem Audrey. I hate 2 faced people. I too like to call a spade a spade, and although it may get us into some trouble I am sure we will not go to hell for it.

I just love your turn of phrase

Voting this up for its pure honesty.

I love it! Raw and naked emotion. Voted up my dear.

Being honest and saying what one thinks makes for a nice long and healthy life..I love people who are honest. I am not trying to figure out what they really mean or if they meant it at all...May rock the boat but oh well...haha Great poem Audrey...

nice work, audrey, you shit disturber you!

Very well said Audrey. With that being my nature, I'm sure to be gagged as well.

Voted up, awesome and shared.

Wonderful and filled with emotion... Thank you for sharing with us.

Hugs from Canada

I'm glad I'm not on your shit list! Haha! Awesome! Always let your voice be heard!:)

Hi Audrey

"You could charm an alligator

to eat honey out of your palm

without breaking skin."

Love it! Voted up and away.

Hope you are enjoying the weekend.

Okay go ahead .....stir it up! , aawesome Audrey +

Very passionate.

wow... Audrey you dont hold anything back.. sometimes it has to come out and you did a great job at expressing your self.

voted up and awesome

Debbie

Interesting piece. No hell for speaking your mind.

such strong will by presenting it ironically...love the truth that lies in this poem Audrey...

Hi Audrey, a great poem, so much expressed, with a deep meaning. I have learnt that I rather be not liked by someone for voicing my opinion than feeling ashamed for keeping it inside. Take care :-)

Great poem Audrey, very unique and interesting, and yet, many people can relate - I'm sure!

Voted up

John

awesome poem.. Like it.. Voted up and i am going to share it

Brilliant and I love this poem. Thanks for writing and share with us. Good job, my friend. Rated up and have a nice weekend!

Prasetio

shit needs disturbing now and again! Hell is a place for shits - not shit disturbers! Keep it real Audrey! Keep making the tough choices!

Wow, Audrey, this one comes at you like one-two punch; awesome!

I think being able to disturb things helps to bring reality to light and change things that may need changing. Great poem! I hope you are doing well. Jamie

I've been called a shit disturber myself from time to time :)

Enjoyed this one!

Audrey...it is kinda disturbing but, keeping my fingers crossed :)

good one!

This poem is very good and very readable and interesting.Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

This is so beautiful and well said, Audrey. You are a brilliant poet.

HaHa, A shit-disturber is a new word to me but the meaning is clear. I can relate. I wonder how you could have done this in haiku style? LOL..Loved it..

a shit-disturber LOL Audrey I loved it!

If you are writing your comments not from the hub but from the comments section, they do disappear from there, but they do post on the hub.

Wow that was a mixture of emotions and speculations.

Well done!

Wow this was brilliant! Tell it like it is!

I too would rather voice my opinion instead of lying and letting things go. I hope that doesn't mean I have to go to that special place in hell.

Voted up and straight and well put! I love that shit-disturber. Don't you just hate people like that who smile but secretly hate you. lol We actually have a saying about such people in Latvian so loosely translated - the less you disturb the shit the less it is likely to smell. This refers to such people.

Thank you so much Audrey ;a great poem and here's to many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Take car enjoy your day my friend.

Eddy.

Very nicely put Audrey.

Interesting poem Audrey. You do have a way with expressing an idea. I voted interesting.

AudreyHowitt people who tell things as they see it are really great and there is no place in hell for them, only heaven. People who call spade a spade are telling the truth, truth and heaven go hand in hand. Love the way you wrote this poem. Voted up.