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My Sweet Refrain (Aking Liyag)
Beautiful Sonata
Sweetest Sonnet
My Sweet Refrain
(My simple offering to the most wonderful Sonnet of sire JP's heart...
Oh, fair maiden
who hath thou taken
thine heart my love
dazzling as the stars above
Thy brilliance shines
I felt so divine,
thus avows full of emotion
my undying devotion
to thee i offer
my life now and forever
to be with thee
till life will live me...
My cherished melody
makes my heart in harmony
My sweet refrain,
To thee I always yearn...
Aking Liyag
Magandang dilag,
bakit mo binihag?
puso ko liyag
at ako'y napapitlag
Taglay na hiyas
ako'y nadulas
at sabay nabulalas
pag - ibig na wakas
Sa iyo iaalay
itong abang buhay
sana huwag sa yo mawalay
hanggang sa ako'y mamatay...
Comments
Lovely indeed. Was the last part the same as in English? Thank you for sharing.
- Author
i'm glad you like it...yeah, it is written in Filipino...the person of whom i dedicate it too requested me to write it in English and Filipino...thank you and you're welcome too...
Awesome poem you really shared in here which i enjoyed reading from. Thanks for sharing.
- Author
thanks for dropping by...and you're welcome!!!
that person seems familiar to me! hahahahahahaha! thanks for this sis Raci! ^_^
- Author
hahahaha din to you Sire...thanks for dropping by...does your sonnet know?hehehe...
Wow! I could feel it more intensely in Tagalog than in English language. Thanks for sharing.
- Author
thank you Thelma for leaving a wonderful comment...have a great day!!!
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