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My Tender Flower

Updated on June 5, 2012

My Darling

I Dreamed of us,

together we played

in the tall green grass,

where we once did lay...

 You gave me your love

so tenderly......

to happen again...

will it ever be ?

I hold you close...

now, only in my dreams

Why can't I make this

a reality....

 I can only stare

into your eyes...

from the picture I have....

It's my treasured prize.

My Tender Flower,

where do you grow ?

 To whom ...do you smile ?

For whom.... do your petals glow ?

Whose sun now doth shines....

upon your beautiful face ?

Who holds your tender heart

 in a treasured place ?

The same way I..

always will hold you so dear,

The way your words...

will always be near.

My Darling, I still love you so.

I just wrote you this... to let you know

Love you always,

Michael



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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      well played with words, voted up

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      well written poem - thank you

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      Brandon Martin 5 years ago from Colorado, USA

      AWESOME! This reached my core, thank you very much!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @girishpuri, thank you for the comments on my poem.

      @hatter, my loyal follower, thanks for the visit.

      @ Brandon, thanks for your kind words. i always try to reach my reader and move them.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Very beautiful, Michael, touching, really touching!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      max, my hub friend. thank you for following

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      where is she now Michael?so sweet and tender...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Raci, who knows aci, she has moved on and so have I.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very beautiful...and tender. ^

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Its just tenderly touched heart deep down. Very moving yet so delicate like the imagery you have woven here. Thank you for this one. Shared all across and votes +++++++++++++++++++

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      sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      So loving and tender. Voted up and awesome

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ jackie, thank you for the comments

      @dghbrh, thank you for the comments

      @sweethearts, thank you forthe comments

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      I love reading your older work that you have highlighted here! WOW, again so sweet, tender and gentle is this write. Your love is very blessed to have you for her very own poet and love in her life!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. actually..my wife does not read my poetry .. she has no interest in it . you may not believe it but it is true. To have you give me compliments, is a warm feeling of appreciation that flows through my poetic heart.. peace and love is what I feel.. from the south across the land for me from you... my lovely friend .

      Are you investigating me ??

      just a thought ..!

      Love ya Faith ..

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh my goodness that hurts my heart for you not to be appreciated especially your God-given gifts but you know that is how it is with family, sadly. Well your gift does not go unappreciated here! Lol eell since I was on your profile page checking out that interesting new avatar you have, I thought I would treat myself and read something of yours I have not read before. Although I do work in a criminal investigative office, no I just love to read lovely writings to relieve the stress of real life's seriousness as a brief escape fom the weekly extreme serious issues I face daily during the work week. Peace and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. thank you for the love faith, well does your husband appreciate your great writing .. does he read it .. does he know that all the men on hubpages love you for the inspiration and support you give ??

      Faith you can come to my hubs anytime you want .. in fact I want you there at least once a day .. LOL

      I am glad my poetry helps you find peace and relaxation..

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Lol Michael, I do not know about all of that, concerning all men on HP lol, but you can just speak for yourself dearest Michael. I am learning that true poets such as yourself are very passionate people and are not afraid to express such to others. You are so funny to instruct me to come to your profile and read once a day, being with my busy life and work schedule I do good to read and comment as I am able to in my free time which has not been too much lately. Your LOL is right ... LOL Well, ALL that I read here on HP helps me to relax from the stress of the day, as I do love to read not only poetry but all of those I follow's work. There are many amazing writers and friends here on HP who I respect as writers and love to really read their work too, so I must fit the time in and I do the best I can considering. LOL

      Thank you for your kindness,

      God bless,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      In all serious ness .. it makes me happy to see your comments on my hubs .. you know that already ..

      You are an amazing woman, FAITH...

      a mother, a grand mother, an amazing working wife and a true friend.

      Thank You Faith ...

      Michael

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      Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

      How wonderful Faith leads others to your beautiful poems Michael. We started out as friends and then seemed to drift apart, almost like your beautiful poem. But luckily I found my way back to your poems and enjoy each and every one.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Mary ... glad you came back to my poetry.. I have written many since then and changed my format and style..LOL but enjoy and come back often ..that will keep both of us smiling.. :)))

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      D.Juris Stetser 3 years ago from South Dakota

      Awesome, Beautiful, Interesting, voted Up and Absolutely Sharing...this is so tender and romantic, Michael....much like the real you, I would imagine. A wonderful piece....

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