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My commitment
Innocence In the Making
A promise to a child
I was there when you took your first breath
Opened your eyes big and bright
Filling my heart with love and delight
For this little being was part of me
All ten fingers and all ten toes
Proud of you as I could be
As the sands of time come and go
I will pick u up when u fall
As I stand by and watch you grow
Seasons pass and fade
I will share my knowledge with you
Now and every decade
I was sure showing you my love would be a test
As you grow and mature
Hoping you become the best
Becuz in your heart of hearts
And in your mind of minds
I know you are very smart
Wanting you to know no matter how big or small
The task at hand may be
Just set your mind to it u can conquer all
No matter what your dreams are
Nor where life takes you
I am never far
No matter how grown up u are
Nor the choices you make
You will always be my shining star
I will always be here for you.
A mothers promise
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Your thoughts, your inspirations.
- Author
I try to write with vision and from the heart.
Apparently, I've developed my interest in poetry... This one, which I just read sounds amazing to me... Well written.
- Author
Thank you soo much for your appreciation of my writing.
Beautiful poetry once again, this reminds me of how my mother use to talk to me about life, thanks for bringing back such a awesome memory of her, this poem is quite precious indeed.
Thumbs up, and out!
- Author
Thank you so much, my oldest will soon be leaving on his own. Its is truly hard to let go but yet stay close.
I liked this, it conveys well the thoughts and feelings we as parents have as the apron strings are gradually loosened and we watch our babies go from children to adults. It's an amazing thing, yet a bit hard on us, it's never easy letting go.
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