My enemy the sun
Dark moon that broke my heart
My enemy now the sun
To wake each day now filed with pain
For I know what I've done
The new moon shines
All through the night
To torment my broken heart
Together the sun and moon
Softly cry.......... as I am torn apart
This sums it up
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A sad poem indeed jon, But always remember even on the darkest day the sun always shinny somewhere. So go and find the sun jon and don't let it slip away x
Very sad and expressive. Don't worry the sun will make you smile again.
The Sun will shine again, Simba.
I know it may take a little while and so I send you all my Love at this time. Endurance and fortitude is necessary
I feel bad when you're sad, Jon. You wear your heart on your sleeve. I know how loving you are. I hope things work out for you.
Beautiful poem... soulful and full of soul.. 'nuff said. We've all been there.
Wow...I feel ya
This is a soulful poem, very sad. The video adds to the sadness. Hopefully you are feeling better. Voted up...Peace....
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