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My enemy the sun
Dark moon that broke my heart
My enemy now the sun
To wake each day now filed with pain
For I know what I've done
The new moon shines
All through the night
To torment my broken heart
Together the sun and moon
Softly cry.......... as I am torn apart
This sums it up
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This is a soulful poem, very sad. The video adds to the sadness. Hopefully you are feeling better. Voted up...Peace....
Wow...I feel ya
Beautiful poem... soulful and full of soul.. 'nuff said. We've all been there.
I feel bad when you're sad, Jon. You wear your heart on your sleeve. I know how loving you are. I hope things work out for you.
The Sun will shine again, Simba.
I know it may take a little while and so I send you all my Love at this time. Endurance and fortitude is necessary
Very sad and expressive. Don't worry the sun will make you smile again.
A sad poem indeed jon, But always remember even on the darkest day the sun always shinny somewhere. So go and find the sun jon and don't let it slip away x
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Lyn if I can find her I will never let her go again ! X
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