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My enemy the sun

Updated on September 5, 2014

Dark moon that broke my heart

My enemy now the sun

To wake each day now filed with pain

For I know what I've done

The new moon shines

All through the night

To torment my broken heart

Together the sun and moon

Softly cry.......... as I am torn apart

This sums it up


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is a soulful poem, very sad. The video adds to the sadness. Hopefully you are feeling better. Voted up...Peace....

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      Angie Shearer 2 years ago from Whangarei, Northland

      Wow...I feel ya

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      JoyLevine 2 years ago

      Beautiful poem... soulful and full of soul.. 'nuff said. We've all been there.

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      I feel bad when you're sad, Jon. You wear your heart on your sleeve. I know how loving you are. I hope things work out for you.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      The Sun will shine again, Simba.

      I know it may take a little while and so I send you all my Love at this time. Endurance and fortitude is necessary

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very sad and expressive. Don't worry the sun will make you smile again.

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      Lyn 2 years ago

      A sad poem indeed jon, But always remember even on the darkest day the sun always shinny somewhere. So go and find the sun jon and don't let it slip away x

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      Simba73 2 years ago from UK

      Lyn if I can find her I will never let her go again ! X

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