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My Lucky Night At The Club (limerick)

Updated on January 4, 2013

Was there at a club we did meet

I never saw sight quite so sweet

My heart was a-thrill

I swear world stood still

At fresh dollar bill at my feet


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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      You did it again, Martin! You have me sitting here chuckling to myself! You're a trip!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      lol..what is it about finding money? even a dime - it's sooo much fun...haha..

      i always give away coins that i find - ya know what they say: find a penny pick it up - pass it on and have good luck!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Always loved it when I found unexpected money.

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      I am so far behind in my reading but now that I've had my great MH giggle, I can sleep.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Money is the root of all evil..Hee..Funny.

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      Ann Carr 5 years ago from SW England

      Great twist! So much with so few words. Well done! Up etc.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now, who dropped the dollar...?

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Wicked sense of humor!

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      Madeleine Salin 5 years ago from Finland

      Great limerick that made me smile! :)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Rollin' in clover my friend! :)

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      Lol. the dollar bill at your feet... good one!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      martin.. you are so funny my friend.. she was so sweet lol


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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Cha-ching! Love it!

      Your limericks are always so much fun.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      So funny you loved the dollar you found at your feet.