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My submission

Updated on September 28, 2012
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I submit to this pain,

showing

this loss is not in vain.


I will live with this pain,

knowing

you do not feel the same.


I will cherish this pain,

glowing

with what whisper remains.


I will sleep with this pain

slowing

my anxious heart’s refrain.


I will wake with this pain,

flowing

as a fugue through my veins.


I am freed by this pain,

sowing

the seed to love again.

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    • Ryan McGill profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan McGill 

      6 years ago from Omaha, NE

      The truth is that I only make small adjustments after some other force within me does the rest. Strange, I know, but that's about the only way I can explain it. I am glad you enjoyed it.

    • Ericdierker profile image

      Eric Dierker 

      6 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      How do you do that? Wonderful gripping phrases. And I have loved and lost and cherished both.

    • Ryan McGill profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan McGill 

      6 years ago from Omaha, NE

      Enjoy :-)

    • Ellen Karman profile image

      Ellen Karman 

      6 years ago from medina, Ohio

      Ah, I just am in the middle of visiting your sight. Your prose caught me. Thank you! Ellen

    • Ryan McGill profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan McGill 

      6 years ago from Omaha, NE

      Now I'll have to go through my waste basket. I've thrown many away over the years....no, I think not, the ones I keep will have to do. Thanks again.

    • Ellen Karman profile image

      Ellen Karman 

      6 years ago from medina, Ohio

      Dear Ryan, keep publishing, I loved it. Ellen

    • Ryan McGill profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan McGill 

      6 years ago from Omaha, NE

      Interesting as I was actually hesitant to put publish this one. I thank you both for your kind words and encouragement.

    • justgrace1776 profile image

      justgrace1776 

      6 years ago

      Powerful is right! Good job, brother!

    • Ellen Karman profile image

      Ellen Karman 

      6 years ago from medina, Ohio

      Wow, what a powerful, beautiful poem! I'm at a loss for words and my comments are usuelly too long! Wow! Beautiful and I voted this up. And Following. Ellen Karman

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