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My submission
I submit to this pain,
showing
this loss is not in vain.
I will live with this pain,
knowing
you do not feel the same.
I will cherish this pain,
glowing
with what whisper remains.
I will sleep with this pain
slowing
my anxious heart’s refrain.
I will wake with this pain,
flowing
as a fugue through my veins.
I am freed by this pain,
sowing
the seed to love again.
Comments
- Author
The truth is that I only make small adjustments after some other force within me does the rest. Strange, I know, but that's about the only way I can explain it. I am glad you enjoyed it.
How do you do that? Wonderful gripping phrases. And I have loved and lost and cherished both.
- Author
Enjoy :-)
Ah, I just am in the middle of visiting your sight. Your prose caught me. Thank you! Ellen
- Author
Now I'll have to go through my waste basket. I've thrown many away over the years....no, I think not, the ones I keep will have to do. Thanks again.
Dear Ryan, keep publishing, I loved it. Ellen
- Author
Interesting as I was actually hesitant to put publish this one. I thank you both for your kind words and encouragement.
Powerful is right! Good job, brother!
Wow, what a powerful, beautiful poem! I'm at a loss for words and my comments are usuelly too long! Wow! Beautiful and I voted this up. And Following. Ellen Karman
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