New Days View
Oh Beautiful Morning! Here comes the sun! Its warmth attracting mind and heart to run.
Leading thoughts to ponder events of the week, while clouds made minds wander, seclusion to seek.
What have I done these past few days, while clouds made ones thoughts run away.
I sweep away gloom of things not befitting. Making more room for creative glinting.
Take out my pen, put into prose. Creating more beauty. Most beautiful rose!
Look at plans made. Make proper revisions. The new light engaging much better decisions.
Shift the minds view from self to others. As the clouds did skew the internal mirrors.
Soak up the sun! Just be with the light! Ridding the gloom, It's power takes flight
Kari Shinal Copyright Oct. 15, 1013
© 2013 Kari Shinal
Comments
AUTHORThe Sun works wonders does it not? Happy to have brought you a ray or two Gypsy!
Voted up and beautiful. You made me smile just reading and imagining that wonderful sun. We have had pretty rainy autumn days here in Latvia recently. Thanks for the sun.
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I bet it was an Awesome sight Martin. Thanks for the read!
You should have seen the sunrise over SF from my 33rd floor office. Beautiful. thank you
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Thanks Poetic!
Beautiful poem Tuatha! Loved it.
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Thanks for the Read Mark!
take out my pen, put into prose. creating more beauty, most beautiful rose-very powerful words. wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it
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Most Welcome Jamie!
And sunshine back at you too! Thank you for the great poem. Jamie
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Thank You Kim! Lots Of Sunshine Right Back To You!
My favorite kind of morning so brightly presented-nice job
Wishing you lots of sunshine,
Kim
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Some days those clouds have the most profound effect on anyone's outlook. Glad to know the sun has similar effects on everyone. Thanks Larry!
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Thank You James! Have a Beautiful Day!
Exposing my mind to the morning's light lately has provided me with the most unexpected view. I don't recognize what I see and that is a gift.
Beautiful and well-written.Voted up!
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